I Keep

I Keep

A Poem by *~Kristy~*

I keep searching,

For something,

I cannot find.

 

I keep wishing,

For a love,

In which I am not blind.

 

I keep begging,

For the one,

Who will be nothing but kind.

 

I keep falling,

For those,

Who catch you in a painful bind.

 

I keep,

I keep,

I keep,

You.

© 2010 *~Kristy~*


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This is pretty deep. I like this and can relate to it very much so. Sad but true, we often find ourselves blinded by love until it's too late. We, in our hearts look at the other person like they can do no wrong, and that they will always love you and never hurt you. Because we would never do anything wrong by them. But sadly, not a lot of people think and feel the same.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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beautiful and so strong in it's simplicity.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There's a desperation in this, wanting to find something more true than what has been found in the past. Many can relate to this, no doubt. The flow was great and it read evenly. All in all, great job on this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah..
i agree..
it can be a song..
nice work..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem, I dont know but I feel the poem can be as a song it has given me a sound in my head. Great job, keep writing :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can imagine this as a song for some reason.
I like this.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is pretty deep. I like this and can relate to it very much so. Sad but true, we often find ourselves blinded by love until it's too late. We, in our hearts look at the other person like they can do no wrong, and that they will always love you and never hurt you. Because we would never do anything wrong by them. But sadly, not a lot of people think and feel the same.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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*~Kristy~*
*~Kristy~*

Williamsburg, KY



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