Why Me?

Why Me?

A Poem by WhyMeGirl
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Hurt By You,,,

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Why Me ?

why did you hurt me

as if i didnt have enought pain

with out you hurting me more

of all people you hurt me

the one person

who has been with you threw out everything

but yet you hurt me

why thank you

WHY....

i thought you loved me

i thought we were together for ever

when you went with that other person

it felt like i was getting killed slowy

yet you didnt care how much pain i was going thru

as long as you were happy

you didnt care how other's felt

i still wonder why you did what you did to me

it is an un answered question,

either you or me know the answer,

© 2011 WhyMeGirl


Author's Note

WhyMeGirl
ignore the spelling and grammar problems

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A very sad poem. Heartbreak is always very tough on the soul. Love being the most powerful emotion of all of them makes us learn lessons as we grow in life. One day I will look back on this, and see how it helped in your personality today. Even though there are spelling and grammar issues, they can be overlooked to enjoy the message you are conveying.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Such sadness, I love the form and flow. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know your pain well. I went through it myself. This is extremely relatable. I hope you're able to find a person who treats you better. The person in the poem is just a b***h.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds really upset. conveys a lot of hurt

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very sad poem. Heartbreak is always very tough on the soul. Love being the most powerful emotion of all of them makes us learn lessons as we grow in life. One day I will look back on this, and see how it helped in your personality today. Even though there are spelling and grammar issues, they can be overlooked to enjoy the message you are conveying.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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sad write and heartfelt. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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WhyMeGirl
WhyMeGirl

Unknown, Why?, Australia



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