A Dream

12-27-12

A dream a fleeting dream

I saw when you finally got it

You allowed me to sweep you

Off of your feet

Everything glowed

With a kiss and the word

Which was swept by the stream

Never to be dreamed again

My feelings came completed

For so long

I just waited for you

Then I opened my eyes

You weren't there

I wish I never had to go

Before so

Entitle me

One more doubtful wish

Before I step foot elsewhere

Soon later I was there

Refusing everything

Even you

When you came

God knew you'd never just stand

You fought

You commanded

You as you

Came to get me

With no decree

We left

So glad

You came

To grab my hand

Leaving the kiss

In full bliss

To me

I am so happy   

Reviews

[Secret Lullaby]

Wow this was amazing!!! Loved it

[Doug Blair]

Firstly, I love point seven of your facts about yourself. The paramour finally comes. He battles. He rescues. He sweeps away. Giving you however the initiative of the kiss that seals. If I have a feminine side, friend, you just touched it. Isn't it wonderful when someone says "that one just got into my head and my heart. Keep going with the woderful gift you hold so appreciatively". Now about gifts, consider the following. Enter in search box "your pies"
http://momentsmidstream.blogspot.ca/#!/2009/05/gifted.html

[Wolfwind]

Fantastic flow of heart poetry! It's pace started slow and built to a happy and hopping level that ended with a smile. Can't get any better than that for such kinds of ink! Well crafted!

Aaron

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

It is never easy to try to express something you know about, but you seem to have done a fair job... rather good actually.

[Time's The Bond]

Thank you, thanks a lot! :-)

[esperanza]

Love it