Ahead in Time

Ahead in Time

Written: 4-11-12

By: Emily Lui

My head isn't where my body is

Lost in a black hole

Can’t get out

I was sucked in

Only a thread connected

To earth too soft

Too focused

My mind won’t negate

Please hold my hand

And find my soul I’m lost

Ahead in time

My eyes open

My mind away

Taken by the wind

What time is it?

How long has it been?

I feel so broken

Can’t demise what’s going

This unkind world

This constrained feeling

Rescind from my body

I feel a vagrant

This fragrant

So distinct

Please come find me

Relive me of this terrain

I’m ahead in time

I hear the chime

I wish it would let me come back

This feeling

It’s become me

Reviews

[***The Lost***]

It is well written. I am fond of how you placed so much emotion behind your words.

[esperanza]

I like it

[Dan Kim]

As I was finishing, I was mouthing the words, "It's becoming mine" ^^ I guess we have different tastes!

Anyhow, a good read. Strength was in the hallowing mood.

[Time's The Bond]

Thanks! :-) Why were you mouthing the words "It's becoming mine"?

[Dan Kim]

It seemed to fit in rhyme and rhythm!

[Time's The Bond]

LOL okay

[The Dreamer]

brilliant - the feeling of being 'lost' is wonderfully expressed. so lost that your whole being is scattered not just in the world alone, but in different time zones - ahead of time- your mind, your eyes , your soul, not together anymore. i liked it! :)

[Time's The Bond]

I'm glad