Some Kiss

 

Written: 1-21-13

By: Emily Lui

 

You grabbed me in

Quickly

Stab the shadow behind

Aim for heart

 

Just above  

You left it with a mark

Embarked on his side

The art a mystery

 

I didn’t cry

I pushed you away

Ran a few strides

 

The sly, cunning you

Like a ghost brisk in the dark

Your hair brushed

From behind you spun me

 

I fell into you

As you pull a powerful, forceful kiss

 

Careful to hold me

Unable to unravel

From merciful wavelike feelings

 

  I did not blush

I did not cry

As you hushed my panting

Embraced by such warm hands

 

I said

 

I have none of what called a type

Upfront told and bold

If I like you then I just do

 

A gust of reasons

Hope to come

In time with you    

 

 

 

Reviews

[floralhorror]

This is really good
I love the flow and the emotion

[Night]

...fast paced, nice thoughts put on paper...:)

[***The Lost***]

Feelings of love dance along the words. Along with love comes confusion never let you falter in your thoughts. All in all a good poem.