Red

A haiku about the color red.

Red runs down her arms,

Bloody, crimson, liquid life,

All of it is red

Author's Note

How'd you like it? Tips and suggestions please! I'm thinking of using all of the colors, than putting it all together into one big poem, called Colors.

Reviews

[Nobody Now]

By all means. I like the idea of colors being utilized. We see them everywhere and over look them often. Being reminded of their intended and natural meanings never hurts.

Good haiku. I disagree, I think a horror is fine considering red is a strong, passionate powerful colorful. Should you decide to change it from "a horror" to "frightful scare", or "liquid life."

Anyways, I like it.

[Savior of Time]

Thanks, I will.

[Phillitup]

I wonder why this is your first color???????:)P

The syllables are all perfect. I like it!

[Savior of Time]

Thanks and cause its the first color of the rainbow (and my best friend)

[Phillitup]

Yup, cause that is the only reason...:)

[Entrelesnuages]

I like how concise it is. It works very well at using just a few words to convey a bigger picture. For that reason "A horror" seems to a little too obvious. You've done such a great job setting it up with that first line I feel like you could pick something more subtle. Nice poem.

[Savior of Time]

Thanks