Hate

I hate you,

Okay?

I hate you,

I cannot stress that enough,

You torture me,

My friends,

Everyone around you,

How do you,

Have friends?

You lure in,

The good,

Somehow,

And bring them to the dark side,

You kill the good,

Inside of them,

Fill the hole,

With evil and greed,

You place cracks,

In these castles of glass,

Called people,

You break the glass,

Not caring that you are hurting us,

That you're making us bleed,

You claim,

That I shouldn't die,

I shouldn't commit suicide,

And yet,

You want me to,

How does that work?

What is the point,

Of helping me up,

If you're just going to knock me down again?

You are evil,

You are the devil's child on Earth,

It wouldn't surprise me,

If your soul,

Was as black as night,

With a giant fire ablaze on the inside,

You set fire,

To hope and happiness,

Every time you spot a speck of it,

You just like to hurt others,

It fills you up,

Like water in a tall glass,

I know it becomes addicting,

You enjoy the feel of pain,

You enjoy seeing others hurting,
While you just sit there,

Emotionless,

I hate you,

Not for your looks,

Not for your grades,

Or your popularity,

But because of how you act,

How you torture,

What you do,

To make yourself feel better,

You bully your way,

Through this world,

Not caring what it will do to you in the future,

You decide to live in the now,

And not care about the later,

But what goes around comes around,

You will get a shot of your own medicine,

And you won't like it,

None of us did,

None of us do,

Now,

Who hates more?

Me?

Or you?

Author's Note

Spur of the moment, I was really angry today because of things so this just came to me. How'd you like it? Leave suggestions and tips for my writing. Thanks!
-Willa

Reviews

[Black Rose]

I really like it. Nice writing it reminds me about someone I know.
My favorite lines were,
None of us did,
None of us do,
Now,
Who hates more?
Me?
Or you?

[Savior of Time]

thanks and im glad you can relate. thanks again!