And a dog

And a dog

A Poem by willweb

Paper plates and plastic forks

Leftover pork and beans

A worn out recliner

A television

and a dog

 

Who doesn’t care about me either

© 2014 willweb


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You created an impressive mood of alienation with a chain of relationships. Perhaps we may add to this chain:

Murphy’s Law

A house
that’s not a home.
A car
that never starts.
A sky
that’s never blue.
A match
that never lights.
A gun
that never fires.
A friend
who never calls.
A bird
who never sings.
A parrot
who never talks.
A kitten
who never purrs.

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Aethereal, you obviously have been spying on me. Glad you liked this.
oh wow, talk about self-abasement---

so much in so few words...excellent piece, and i like how it goes from the inanimate objects to the dog...

nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob
can't get any worse than that will! i'll put a steak on the barbie for you .. throw a bone to the dog .. you can have the couch in the living room .. your choice of veggie fresh from the farm :) wishing you well and prosperous!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


willweb

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the invitation Einstein Noodle. That sounds like something to take you up on. I am gla.. read more
I thought a dog's love was unconditional.
Oh wait!!!
I get it!
Is this dog female? By chance?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Yes, well. I'm not just a pretty old face. :)
willweb

9 Years Ago

Not going there. :)
Matching Socks

9 Years Ago

Haha! :-)

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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