Missing

Missing

A Poem by willweb

 

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Down on the beach today, 

I've got nicely chilled cabernet, 

some delicious cheese and fruits, 

a couple of comfortable beach chairs, 

a few soft towels, a big wool blanket 

and a brightly colored 

mbrella 

 

there is only one thing missing 

 

© 2024 willweb


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A special note to a special person who, - surely, must be smiling!

Posted 1 Week Ago


willweb

1 Week Ago

I hopes so. : ) Thank you dear Emma for always being so kind.
So cute and quirky :) Liked it

Posted 1 Week Ago


willweb

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much.
Very cute! You also spelled coloured wrong 🙂


Posted 1 Week Ago


willweb

1 Week Ago

Nice catch! That's why you are one of my favorites...oops, I mean favourites. : )
Thanks so m.. read more
well :))))))))))))) ... if i place me self there my friend ... there are more than one thing missing .. love this one .. playful .. romantic and wistful... really good stuff from the tire to the road .. love on ya .. peace and joy
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


willweb

1 Week Ago

Thanks my friend and yes, I think I know what you mean. : )
A very relaxing poem, setting and everything so fine.
But the only one thing missing is (U)mbrella!

Very creative with the way you write,
-Amy

Posted 1 Week Ago


willweb

1 Week Ago

Thank you again, Just my attempt at a little poetic humor.
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Amy R

1 Week Ago

Very nice, you're welcome.

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Added on May 14, 2024
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willweb
willweb

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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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