Waves of change

Waves of change

A Poem by willweb

~

As I breathe,
I feel the ocean breathing
Here I stand,
a moonbeam in my hand
Touch my heart,
and know this endless feeling
Like the tide,
our journey now is planned

Horizons call,
a beacon in the distance
Silhouettes,
now dance upon its shore
Take a chance,
and reach for what you’re dreaming
As these sands,
may wash away no more

I have come,
of sailing vessels calling
As the foam,
so silent meets the sea
Waves of change,
will not dispose emotions
Drifting soft,
as you lay here with me

Melodies,
are found of waves now stirring
Glistening,
this twilight canopy
Heaven’s song,
in whispered quiet motions
As the stars,
extend your light I see

And I smile,
for here we find the rainbow
Rains may fall,
from clouds upon the sky
Still the sun,
now sends its dancing shadows
In your arms,
my love stays warm and dry

Stardust eyes,
enhance the scene so sweetly
Golden tan,
your skin upon my own
Miles long,
this beach awaits our footprints
Now our love,
has come to take us home

~

© 2024 willweb


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love the rhyme and rhythm of this poem...complex in some ways, yet billowy and up in the clouds at best; rain may fall, but the sun will keep you dry...."waves of change will not dispose emotions"..."stardust eyes enhance the scene so sweetly"....line after line of pure poetic beauty
Warmly, B

Posted 1 Week Ago


Will this duet of a poem was amazing as each alternate line in call and response went on. I reread it and every alternate line is a poem in and of itself. It must have been a lot of work to compose, but it reads magically. Hats off my friend.

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Thanks so very much Soren. I hadn't noticed that, I will read it again myself right now.
You are without doubt THE romantic poet will. You are certainly giving the old masters a run for their money. I always appreciate the flow of your work. It just slips smoothly off the tongue. Reads so well when read out loud. Such intelligent use of rhyme and fab imagery. Well done.


Chris

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Wow Chris, thanks. It means a lot coming from you. I am so happy you liked this.
Chris Shaw

2 Months Ago

You are welcome. Lovely poetry will.
An especially beautiful rendition that read like a song. I loved the structure of this poem, the lovely quartets and the way you placed them.
The meter and rhyme made the message so effective.
Adored the 3rd verse. The promise of love feels so complete, reading this. Kudos dear Willweb. 💜

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Thank you so very much Divya my friend for once again leaving words that brought a smile to my face... read more
Beautiful stuff. Evocative.

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much John, Glad you liked it.
John Sullivan

2 Months Ago

I did. I say "evocative" so much it's probably starting to lose meaning coming from me, but it is. N.. read more
your work always makes me think of the old bards like Wordsworth and Byron and others, but in a current body of words.
Such uplifting sentiment expressed here.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

Wow Jacob, what a compliment. Man, you humble me with your thoughts. Thank you.
This is stunning. I wish I could think of something more to say but it's just beautiful love poetry.

Posted 2 Months Ago


willweb

2 Months Ago

What you wrote is more than enough for me. Coming from a talented poet like yourself, any comment me.. read more

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Added on May 17, 2024
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Hi, I am willweb. Maybe you remember me and maybe you don't. I have been writing here on and off for years. I pop in and write and read and comment and make friends and learn new things. I enjoy maki.. more..

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