Morning Song

Morning Song

.

 

Woke up to

a lovebird’s lyrics,

sung upon a dewdrop lawn

 

Touching so

her words did echo,

sweet this effervescent dawn

 

Mesmerized

I listened closely,

breezes through my window fell

 

To her sound

of sunrise blessings,

captured swiftly by her spell

 

I sat down

at my piano,

destined by what I did hear

 

Found the chord,

a soft progression,

whispered sweetly in my ear

 

Filled my heart,

melodic measures,

pure the love in me did grow

 

Playing keys,

symphonic tempo,

beautiful the sound did flow

 

On my sill

she sang her sonnet,

as my fingers played along

 

Lost within,

the dawn’s concerto

of her wondrous morning song

 

Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

Truly a mesmerizing mental image, it was as if the singer was heaven-sent, and the avatar of morning had truly knocked on one's chambers, awakening not just the body but the fluent mind of an artist. A pleasant read, thank you author willweb.

[willweb]

Thank you again for your kind comments

[John Sullivan]

I have a cardinal that lives outside my window, it's always a pleasure to see him. And cheers on the piano, it's a fine instrument!

[willweb]

Thanks so much John for yet another visit to my work. I appreciate your time.

[Whits_End]

So glad I stopped by. I think I can hear it.

[willweb]

Thank you so much. I am happy the melody found you

[Ken Simm.]

There a words that apply if not sum up this morning song to me. Words like gossamer and clear, bright and pearl like. Enchanting and animated. Diamond and rare.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Ken. Means a lot coming from a talented artist like you

[Obsidian]

An enchanting morning song. The writing here is so dreamy that one can close their eyes and see it all blossom.

[willweb]

Hey, thanks so much. I appreciate your kind words today

[Gee]

Reads like a scene from an animated Disney film:)
So good, flawless rhyming and rhythm

[willweb]

Thanks Gee. Like Mary Poppins and the robin singing. : ) That's the first thing that popped into my head at the mention of Disney. I appreciate your visit and comment

[Sami Khalil]

Lost within in serenity and enjoyment, the author shares those wondrous moments of simply living and enjoying. Beauty did flow from this poem.

[willweb]

Thanks so very much Sami. I am glad you enjoyed this little poetic morning duet.

[Sami Khalil]

Soft and gentle wordings