1 year anniversay~01-28-08

this is me writing thoughts trying to break free of my writer's block; it may suck, but its mine, & I give it permission to suck

A year ago today

my world was crushed

not literally, not yet

but everything that happened

from a year ago today to today

made it literal.

 

I don't wish to dwell

but the melancholy of it all

is a weight I cannot lift

just one thing after another

it builds

until I fall

 

Today I start anew

I look forward instead of back

I'm scared but hopeful

Happy has so much potential

I think I'd be

good at it if

only I'd try it

Reviews

[Jennifer]

Another great poem. I really loved it all but this was my favorite part-

Happy has so much potential

I think I'd be

good at it if

only I'd try it

Very inspiring. I can really relate to this one.

[Nicole Renee]

I thought this was very good and that it's true; Go on forward and don't look back at the bad things in the past.

-Nicole