i, like you, would not have survived without poetry...it is my life's blood...i feel more like a conduit for the muse than a real poet...the words seem to flow through me without much direction from me...
i can't take much responsibility...
but as Melanie sang...." i am not a poet, living is the poem"
i think that is true....but yes, there are those who write poetry from time to time...and those who are poets because they never stop...
and you also hit on the fact there are so many forms...when i define poetry i do as so: Poetry is not Prose...
there are 20 page poems...then there are poems like a colleague of mine made up once..."butterfly flutter by..."
even graffiti is poetry in its own "write"--
such an expansive and wonderful genre.
i love your description here.
j.
This is my first visit to, your pages. : )
How exciting and arousing to one senses to read your insightfully varied and interesting take on poetry.
"My words flow, swim, trickle.
And evolve through the rain."
I see this not so much a poem as a commentary; yet, a deeply insightful and moving piece to ponder.
Bless you for sharing your writing skill with us! ⁓ Richard 🍃
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Aww, thank you! Originally, my goal in writing was to start a "round robin" within the poetry group .. read moreAww, thank you! Originally, my goal in writing was to start a "round robin" within the poetry group I was a member of. That does not exactly work when you say everything that could be said - plus the length thing - . . . . at least they claimed I had already said everything and nothing could be added. Surely that was not true.
You are indeed a poet. It takes one to recognise another. I like very much the thoughts that you have sprinkled here at my feet. Words are everything to me.
Chris
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
You truly humble me. Thank you. Since I really need to improve my non-poetic repertoire, I've just p.. read moreYou truly humble me. Thank you. Since I really need to improve my non-poetic repertoire, I've just posted a couple things of prose also. And of course, another poem. I'm gonna go catch my breath now.
These are nice descriptions of poetry. Words not only describe the things around us, the things we're experiencing, or things from our imagination, they describe us. How we're able to put forth our ideas in a way that stands out or the lack thereof.
Welcome to the site. It's nice to have you here. :)
Is there a way you could describe the meter or rhythm in this?
5 Years Ago
Freeverse? It reminds me of the way Psalms are read - rhythmic in their way, but no set rhythm per s.. read moreFreeverse? It reminds me of the way Psalms are read - rhythmic in their way, but no set rhythm per se. I have a lot of poetry like this. I also have a good portion of metrical rhyme. For me, the meter and rhyme are mere style. What makes it "poetry" is the living essence that jumps off the page and grabs readers inside their own voice. I believe the heart of a poet is the lifeblood. The head of the poet merely takes the words and puts them in order so readers can understand. What ya think?
If you write like this, which is so good, you should add more work here so we can enjoy it. I noticed only one poem. Written long ago, it is still very relevant.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Aww shucks! Now I'm blushing. Thank you for your kinds words. It is true - been quite a minute since.. read moreAww shucks! Now I'm blushing. Thank you for your kinds words. It is true - been quite a minute since I have written anything besides business content and a few how to bits. I promise to post a little bit from each genre in which I write. Poetry is my strongest. I also need to build up enough material for a decent size chapbook.
i, like you, would not have survived without poetry...it is my life's blood...i feel more like a conduit for the muse than a real poet...the words seem to flow through me without much direction from me...
i can't take much responsibility...
but as Melanie sang...." i am not a poet, living is the poem"
i think that is true....but yes, there are those who write poetry from time to time...and those who are poets because they never stop...
and you also hit on the fact there are so many forms...when i define poetry i do as so: Poetry is not Prose...
there are 20 page poems...then there are poems like a colleague of mine made up once..."butterfly flutter by..."
even graffiti is poetry in its own "write"--
such an expansive and wonderful genre.
i love your description here.
j.
"She ain't right, she ain't!"
That is what they said.
Did they want normal? A setting?
Normal load. That is what they want.
I'm not normal. I'm extraordinary.
And that is okay. I know it is.
Th.. more..