Stony Heart

Yet another quick, random piece that was inspired by absolutely nothing.

Shall I be lost to the unknown,

Doomed by my heart of stone?

 

As a man I've grown,

To recognize my faults -

One is my heart of stone.

 

The world I have shown,

The shallowness of soul,

Caused by my heart of stone.

 

To many shots I've blown,

Loves lost along the way,

To my heart of stone.

 

For much I must atone,

My stubborn pride foremost,

Fueled by my heart of stone.

 

Shall I forever walk alone,

Or melt my heart of stone?

Reviews

[Manda]

oh this is very nice. I could feel the emotion and it well expressed as always. I loved how you kept repeating "heart of stone" the ending is very good. you are very talented. I enjoy your writing =) keep it up!

[deeps]

To many shots I've blown,
Loves lost along the way,
To my heart of stone.

For much I must atone,
My stubborn pride foremost,
Fueled by my heart of stone.

I can really realte to these words alot,
Especailly the Stubborn part...LOL
Like this alot, very well stated and expressed!