I'm fine

So yeah, me.

"I'm fine." She typed as blood dripped down her wrists. 

She puts her arms around her friend, but not for them, for herself. 

She smiled big and bright, while inside she was crying and waiting for it to end. 

She doesn't know what she's waiting for, and she doesn't want to anymore. 

She'll do anything for somebody to make them smile, but nobody can help her. 

She doesn't want anybody to know that she's suffering, but she can't take it anymore. 

She hides in her room because she's afraid to be seen. 

And she is me, and this is who I am. 

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Wow deep this speaks truely of the mind set one who wishs to beloved but is not and hides that fact would be in. I can tell your speaking from experience. Life is well it sucks thats is that. I have thought of the same thing just not for a means to end it. Just to feel something but i a guy so i really dont bleed from the wrists. I use both my mind and body to feel anything at all but that has changed some what with finding some who can understand me and why. With out feeling sorry for me or saying i need help. So yeah this was a very deep and beautiful piece. Thank you so very much! Yours truely a mad lord

[Lexi]

I love this, I can relate so much. I absolutely hate that you feel like this though, I really wish I could fix it. The rhythm is beautiful and has a very good flow to it. It's so tragic and represents so much emotion. It seems as though we constantly fear what others willl think if they found out or darkest secrets but we crave for someone to know, to understand, and to hold us occasionally in our darkest hours. Well done, message me if you ever need anything :)

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you. Lately I have been doing a bit better, but it's nice to know people care. And if you ever need anything, feel free to message me back. :3 it does seem like we fear what people think, doesn't it?

People seem to really like my poetry, which is pretty cool, but I don't write poetry very often.

[Lexi]

I don't either haha, but it seems to make things better. You are pretty good so I'd definitely keep it up haha :)

[Silent Wolf]

I probably will. :3

[Dannyisawriter]

I seriously like this. I feel like everyone probably does this one way or another. Rather than talk about your pain and let it all out, we all just tell everyone "I'm fine"

[Silent Wolf]

At one point, this was true, but I've been doing better lately. But yes, I agree. I know several people who did this exactly word for word, and some who've done it in other ways. It's kind of hard to tell everybody how you're feeling when you're afraid that they'll think you're making it up.

[Dannyisawriter]

Yeah just about everyone probably does this because they fear they'll get some kind of judgment. Or they don't think anyone will understand.

[Silent Wolf]

When I finally told somebody, they like freaked out and I ended up in the hospital that same afternoon. But if I hadn't have told anybody, it would have been a bad choice on my part.

[StrixNebulosa]

I know the feeling, though now I know a new feeling... I hope you can find what it is I have found, its far from "bliss" it is content... we suffer the hard times, thank you for being bold enough to share one of yours.

[Silent Wolf]

Thanks for reading. :) yeah, it is hard. You just have to learn to live and let go.

[Oswald Chesterfield Cob..]

This is so dark, but yet so beautiful at the same time. You are a great writer :) hope to read more from you soon

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you. :)

[Oswald Chesterfield Cobblepot]

Your absolutely welcome :)

[BlackRose]

Love it. Described well and uniquely of the pain one feels when they may have it inflicted on them in anyway. Who knows who has problems or if it lingers inside triggered by something, anything.

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[Silent Wolf]

Yes, exactly.

[Kasey Miriam]

Painful and like so many I know My senior year of highschool was pure torture. There is a light at the end of the tunnel though

[Silent Wolf]

Yes, there is. Thanks for reading.

[Kasey Miriam]

you are very welcome.

[Jake Donald Stephens]

I love this.
We do it all the time.......
"How's it going, Jake? " they ask.
"Good, just fine, " I respond. Because that is the expected answer, isn't it??
But how many people are really just fine?
How can we express what we really feel, to people in a world that just doesn't care?
As blood drips down my wrists......what a feeling. I know of it.
You had something to say, and you said it. Well done, young lady.
I would say we need more writers like you, but.....that would be a cliche, wouldn't it? And clearly you don't deal in cliches.......which makes you who you are......which is one of a kind, huh?
Thanks for sharing these strong emotions with us.

[Silent Wolf]

You are welcome. Also, I don't mind cliches. :)

[Sami Khalil]

A apinful thing and write...Thank you for sharing...:).....................

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you for reading.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Stephen]

Sometimes or may be most of the time, we feel bad get pain into the heart just cause of world because the world's not as same as before, it's been spoiled by people playing wicked games. This wicked world's filled with bad evils who always get trying finding a way teasing good people so, this's all what you combined into the poem and let your feelings expressed giving a frame to your this poem.

Your emotions, pain, ache, hurt everything's real and been reflecting from this piece clearly. What all I can say is, "May you've a bright life!"

[Silent Wolf]

Thank you. And I'm glad you liked it. :)

[Taeko Shimizu]

I don't think anyone should force you to take either road. Whether or not you want to end your life is up to you and no one else's. But what you plainly missed to see will look back at you. Even as you lay there dead, they will look back at you with regrets, knowing that they could have guided you to something better. I just wish you could see the good in things and look for something that will finally cease those hurtful thoughts, my friend.
You're not alone. We are both on the same boat, along with others who have felt this way. Truthfully, as I read your poem, I feel like I am looking at myself from past events.

[Silent Wolf]

*hugs* I'm not gonna die yet. And yes, I do realize everything there is offer here and now.

[Taeko Shimizu]

darkness plagues the good, but people like us are stronger than to let it fill within us completely, taking us whole. I'm more than glad you have guidance to lead the way, like a lantern it will be.

[Silent Wolf]

Yes, I do have light in the darkness.