Impulse

A heartbeat

 

beats 

 

a steady pulse.

 

When your sword gleams

with power    -your power-

over the powerless,

 

may you know

of a heart

 

that sounds of fear,

 

and brings back tragedies

that rumble within the shaken ground

on top of which

has walked every human 

and sane man,

insane man dropped from heights, unfathomable.

 

Shall I look desperately into

the depths of your hideous eyes

in search

of innocence, regret?

 

You are, as I am,

drowning in a sea of

undetermined profoundness.

 

I hear

the impulse

 

of a heartbeat

 

pulse within me,

 

within you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I have to agree with Silent and Dark Angel's Storm. It sure is a driving force that moves us within. Sure is an amazing write.

[nono]

Well I love this. Like a driving force just waiting to move. I love it it's amazing well written and kinda like heart with no beat, the sun with no shine, and and people with no pulse. Really this is wonderful nice job!

[Dream Weaver]

Impulse: a driving force producing a forward motion...
On impulse this is a splendid write...

[Dark Empress]

I like it, very good poem indeed.

[.]

powerful write I like it alot. Well done

[Robin]

Impulse , this is really good, I like it

[.]

I liked this! I am reminded of a drop of water as it builds falls into the bucket, then creates the echo of ripples upon the surface.

Ash

[Blossom]

I Really like this!!!! btw I tried calling you today!! you didn't pick up