Apple Of My Eye

This was an assignment, but I realy liked it so I put it out here. Please tell me what you think.

Of all the people who mean a lot to me,

You are the one I love to see.

You are kind, loving, and you give the best hugs,

When I was little, you called me bug.

Taking care of me is what you would do,

And now its my turn to take care of you.

You would tell me that I'm the apple of your eye,

And I just can't say good bye.

 

I love you Grammy!

Reviews

[Anjali]

Beautiful! That's so good. The rhyming is amazing and the emotions are so well put together. I loved it!

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

I recently wrote poetry based on family members and its great to see other people doing the same you are very talented and i'm sure your granny is very proud of you

I look forward to reading more of your work

100/100

[Sunflower 20]

very nice, well done! and thanks for sharing :)

[astoundinglyattractive]

awwwww!!!!!!!! so cut :3 xD :)

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

This is sweet and touching. I wish I'd had the chance to look after my grandma before she passed.

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

This is sweet and it makes my eyes water a little. My favorite lines are 'Taking care of me is what you would do, And now its my turn to take care of you'. Short and cute...

[Ashley Myers]

awwww. i wish i had the opportunity to take care of my grandma. i miss her so much. cherish it. it may be difficult at times to take care of her but youll miss it when you dont have it anymore. cherish it