broken down

What do you do when your all out of gas

Stranded on the side of the road

So many streets to go down

 

You don’t know were your going

You know that you can never turn back

But what do you do when you don’t even know who you really are

 

Things lurking in the dark, waiting for you to walk by

Watch out there goes some a*s holes

Trying to use you, mind wash you, next thing you know youll be dead

 

Your trying to fallow the stars

But there is starts out

There is clouds all over the sky

 

Some times you cant even see the sun

It get dark and you get scared

There is just so many things that can go wrong on the road called life. 

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

I really liked this one--especially the part about "where do you go when you don't know who you are anymore" In my opinion, that one line is the very soul of this poem.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Very straight forward. Nice poem. I love it. Life can throw many things that sometimes isn't so merry and dandy. But.. even with the hardships.. we often forget to go live.. "Seize the day" & "Make the most out of life". ^o^ We often forget it. I like how your poem questions life. And things that do happen that gets bad.. its very realistic and at times its scary to look forward in life when things you never thought of happens.. Great write! =D I enjoyed reading this.