~ Mornings in Marrakech

~ Feel it... Minty

~ Mornings in Marrakech

 

In the magic of the Moroccan air

Full of perfume mixed with love

Gasoline and local food we smelled

We kissed and ate, and

We danced until the sun came up

My heart felt every bit of the ambience

Involved, and landed in our soul

Like little serotonin bubbles in my blood

Danced within the power, of being

When I closed my eyes, I felt the embrace

Of the North African beauty

Sultry mornings,

In our neighborhood

O’ lovely Marrakech

Where nights are golden and

Days are rich as the sun gives light

Let me be reborn into this magic

For ones and for always in your arms

I shall close my eyes, for ever

To whisper with your love

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[KeeD]

Morocco brought to life by words, I felt the rich morning sun and the markets along with the cool nights as the breeze refreshed my face making me realize i'm still in my room but wow did your poem take me on a first class journey to Morocco. Much love and respect for this piece. amazing

Aw thank you so much, so did yours with me.... it's amazing! I miss gibraltar, and Morocco for the whole night now lol.... thank you dearly!

[Poetic Justice]

Morrocco is such a vibrant place, I can still smell the jasmine and tea..while that wonderful music bursting out of the little cafes filling my mind with joyous memories..wonderful thanks!

Thank you PJ, yes it is...so glad you come up with jasmine and tea :) xx

[Dr. Wood ?]

beautiful....quite beautiful

Must point out a typo though...6th line from last...WHERE has an 'H'

Terrific poem though, it took me to a place I have never seen...And sadly...never will

Many thank yous, kind sir.

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This is such an awesome poem. I love the way you play with your words "Like little serotonin bubbles in my blood" to "I felt the embrace Of the North African beauty". This is a very mystical and "handsome "piece you have here Ms. Elisa. I tip my cap to you as always :)

-Cord

Thank you dear poet, and friend, for your wonderful words. Nice you picked those two lines out. *smile*

[Poetic Justice]

I used to buy the posies off the little children in the street and place on the bedstead...still buy the incense as the smell is exotic and sensual :)

That is totally astonishing dear... I adore the fresh mint tea ever time, I go drink them with morroc friends, or when I go to oriental places... x

[Poetic Justice]

oops meant to write that in my comment...sorry LOL

No worries... it happend me too one day :P LOL haha... not a problem at all, becides, now has Cord something to read :)

[An owl on the moon]

An extraordinary, exquisite write that transports us to this land of enchantments... Magical and mystical in every way, and so much more so in your telling, dear poet!

Thank you dear Craig, friend and Poet, for your magical words :)

[Ayanda Mteto]

Wow! very artful and well written highlighting your pursuit for perfection :-)

Thank you very much Ayanda

[khalid]

i can imagine the beauty you are talking about since i live in similar environment ...very nicely penned..

I know you do dear Khalid, thank you so so much ...

[Constance L. Hartwell]

As my eyes scrolled down each line, I felt as if I were taking a trip of my own. You did a great job with imagery.

Thank you x

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E.L. exquisite views you give my eyes to journey across :)

Glad you like it dear lynn thank you so much x

[Emma Ruth]

Ah, I love your imagery - it's almost as if I'm there :) Thank you! Very nice... x

Thank you very much dear Emma :)

[The Analog Kid]

The imagery was spectacular. This was so romantic and I could smell the place and feel the passion.

Thank you so much dear friend... It was my intention, to share it with you guys... :)

[The Analog Kid]

Nicely done.

*smiling* thank you