~ Blue Mountain

~ My love, light, and strength... my "Blue Mountain"

~ Blue Mountain

 

You are one of a kind, my blue mountain,

I have thoroughly studied every relief of yours

The perfect skin, with your red blood

Pumped passion through your cheeks,

To give me the perfect undertone for

Blue into some purple reliefs and visions

In each cliff of yours I find a history,

As in every wrinkle, I see the light

I was in there, many times, stucked

And hidden in your kingdom to reach the sun,

As your oxygen always saves my being

You are my pride and my splendor to hold

No white canvas, but highly colored

With the reflection of your sea maiden

In navy colored hue, where I make a dive

And let your eyes closed until I’m finished

Your smile, is like the sleeping moon

Your eyelashes closed, peaceful like sparkling

Comets, even your lips, are the gate

In our universe, where you can open them

To other realms of amor, surreal and delightful

You’re the King of blues, as my name

Only sinks within your presence, but

I love to, give myself fully over in your

Bed of love, with the sky reflected on

Your so peaceful and elegant skin.

Where I’m love drowned and lost within

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

This turns the blue I sometimes feel into something blue-tiful. :D

Lame pun I know, but this work, with its descriptions of color, comets and mountains all wrapped into a tight package of something (erotic/lovely), is pure passionate, pure beauty. Thank you for this.

Haha you made me laugh, thanks my friend for your beautiful review

[Julian.Norton]

wow I have alot to learn. I hounestly wasnt expecting this kind of quality poems on this site.

Thank you so much for your beautiful words. Truly welcome you're here, and I will read you, I promise..

[FJ Davis]

Merely quick stream-of-consciousness, or unvarnished automatic writing?
Whichever, high quality poetry--complete with stark imagery and metaphorical applications.
Incredibly romantic, Elisa Laura!

Very keen question dear Frank :)
I only know, (I wrote it in 5/6 minutes) listening to whatread moreVery keen question dear Frank :)
I only know, (I wrote it in 5/6 minutes) listening to what
I really felt. In combination with a part of my profession, this
Rolled out. I appreciate your deeper thoughts! always interesting
How an outsider sees it. Be blessed,

Elisa

[Sweets]

Loved your use of metaphor. Beautiful imagery, very deep and emotional :)
Wonderful work!!

Thank you very much Sweets :)

[Sweets]

anytime :)

[lee von cleef]

A good read , Mountains , changing their skin to match a sun or moon ,to hold your free climb, give you a hold of protection for the foot and soul, thank you , thank you Mountain too.....

Thank you for noticing that too, Lee! amazing keen eye :)

[Tree]

I like the metaphor you use. A blue mountain. A visionary, dreamy romatic style that appeals to me. The well chosen music also, gives this poem another dimension. Well done.

Thank you so much poet! so are your own words... Eli

[Sami Khalil]

A song of the heart from a beloved to another with the perfect undertones of feelings and the sparkling of words ... I can feel the " pumped passion " in the color of love and the perple reliefs and visions... I love the line:
Your smile , is like the sleeping moon...
Awesome as always dear friend...

Oh and thank you dear Sami for your words of wisdom, and great review. Nice you picked out one of the most important lines. Smiling....

[Sami Khalil]

You are quite welcome...

:)

[Sami Khalil]

Salamat ...
In arabic means greetings...

Oh that is so funny, it is all connected...

[Sami Khalil]

Yep... Arabic has 12000 roots , a tier one language, old and ancient...
You will see a lot of words in any languange that borrowed from it ... I had a dictionary one time of all the words that sprang drom Arabic...

Yes, that is so true, as Indonesia has the most muslims, and a rich kolonial past with the Netherlands and Portugal, so also a lot of those influences (speaking of behasah Indonesia the language) are influenced of those periodes, it is very interesting all..... I'm also so intrigued by sanskrit... one of the most oldest ones...

P.s. you will learn me one day! Arabic is magically beautiful.

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

* I mean teach, instead of the "Dutch interpreted learned" as we say it here. Sometimes, my native tongue is more dominant in my unconcious... :)

[Sami Khalil]

K... That is alright...

[Corset]

Always what I want to say but never comes to the blue like your words do, beautiful lines my friend as always a song from an angel.

Thank you so much sweetheart, Actually I wrote this write for my love in 5,6 minutes I think, without knowing I was writing, it came from my heart. xx

[sierrasparks91]

this shows alot of emotions and very well written

Thanks :)

[G!o]

...this is really some amazing visual effect that you have painted with your words. This is really artistic and lovely burdened with strong emotions...i love the picture that you accompanied it with. Beautiful work E.L

Thank you so much :)