~ Red Moon

This is a collaboration, between Red Moon and Blue Mountain, This is part two... as my older writes are still under construction, They will be visible in time...

~ Red Moon

 

 

Your touch is like little feathers

Upon my skin, each spot you hit

When you travel and walk

Upon my female curves

In silky ways, your smoky

Breath covers me, as clouds

Moving it passes by

Your eyes are tattooed on my

Skin as you watch each and every

Slide I make across the universe

Connected in the touch of you

You study my heartbeat

In your fingertips

I feel your powers

Just ignite me my dear

Your icy wind teases me

But it merges with

My Red warmth in a whirlpool

Of love, and we amalgamate

Purple skylines, with words

In demise with airbrushes

We paint, the whole night

To warm up our erotic space

When I breathe your thin air

My Blue Mountain, the snow

Shall melt, with my breath of love

In your robust and male skin

While you make me dizzy

And turning faster

Where each and every moment

The music voices shall be heard

Of our magical humming spring

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Shandra Sun]

Oh my god...you'r amazing girl!
Only a exceptional woman could describe love in those two interwined dimensions of phisical and spiritual, as yuo do, in this piece of art.
And the music is just the perfect background for such an experience.
You keep surprising me. Wonderfully done.

Thanks love for your wonderful comment, you are sweet x

[Rob Santana]

This has to much adult content for me....haha JK. This is very good.the way you describe how it feels to be touched by this person is solid imagery. Great choice of words. Muy bien Elisa.

Gracias amigo.... All is a bit mixed up now in my library, old and new ones... It was part two, of the collaboration. I had with my hubby lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are everything cold about nature and yet when we merge...my warmth will melt you...a song of the heart...his nature is to be distant, but she reaches him...and there is love.

jacob

For visitors it is to see distance, for real time lovers a lie... :) wonderful thoughts dear friend :)

[Chris]

You "dance" exquisitely.

Thank you Chris, wich dance you would name it?
Have a lovely day, is it snowing there? Here a lot... E.

[Chris]

The danse? - sinuous and charming. Here it WANTS to snow ,,,but hasn't.

Ah, grey/white skies, lovely. Thank you for your words, always a pleasure to have you by Chris.

[Chris]

Eli, you've music for a soul...

If you say so :) I believe.

[Chris]

It isn't what I say dear...it's what I hear...

That makes it even more serene.... thank you again...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ohhhhh This is Lovely!! :D
Nothing takes my breath away more than the moon... such enticement you have captured in this piece, Sis! Your artistic vision paints a seductive imagery. I love this. Gorgeous write, indeed!

Thank you so much... dear, it was a collab between me and Ro, we had worked on it for a long time, busy sceduals in the middle, but every time a little bit... the first part was with the blue man, and bodypainted... maybe you remember that one, it will be soon back in my library, hope you're ok! missing you hugs! ♥

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I would love to re-read the one about the Blue man...I think I remember it! :)
The collab is Gorgeous!...from two beautiful writers entwined into one..this truly shows the passion you both have. A delicious write! ~xoxo~ :)

Thank you sis... I will post it to you now, in private, for you have the sneak preview lol :D

[Time's The Bond]

DANG

:)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

simply magical, gorgeous poem, eli! I love every singe word, as always u make great combination of words to achieve strong effect! so pure and so warm, so beautifully written, express the high need and devotion of love!
nour~

Thank you for your paintbrush of love on my page dearest, so glad you enjoyed, hugs from me and my hubbie xoxo

[Debbie_Philly]

Beautiful Piece !!! :)

So nice to see you again dear!!!! Thank you very much xxx :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

WHOA, definately blown away here!! = D i enjoyed the read and I loved it! It has such power in your words and love the imagination. = ) Very creative and playful! Thank you for writing! Keep it up! = D

Thank you dear :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

= ) no problem!!

[khalid]

speechless...or i think i got frozen...i dont think there would be any words worthy to review such a poem..it is really wonderful in everything specially the sweet nice smooth feelings of love and passion..at the same time, these feelings are covered with the nice words you picked...
briefly...i have really enjoyed this..thank you for yoursensitive feelings..

Thank you so much Khalid :)