~ Red Moon

This is a collaboration, between Red Moon and Blue Mountain, This is part two... as my older writes are still under construction, They will be visible in time...

~ Red Moon

 

 

Your touch is like little feathers

Upon my skin, each spot you hit

When you travel and walk

Upon my female curves

In silky ways, your smoky

Breath covers me, as clouds

Moving it passes by

Your eyes are tattooed on my

Skin as you watch each and every

Slide I make across the universe

Connected in the touch of you

You study my heartbeat

In your fingertips

I feel your powers

Just ignite me my dear

Your icy wind teases me

But it merges with

My Red warmth in a whirlpool

Of love, and we amalgamate

Purple skylines, with words

In demise with airbrushes

We paint, the whole night

To warm up our erotic space

When I breathe your thin air

My Blue Mountain, the snow

Shall melt, with my breath of love

In your robust and male skin

While you make me dizzy

And turning faster

Where each and every moment

The music voices shall be heard

Of our magical humming spring

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Shandra Sun]

Oh my god...you'r amazing girl!
Only a exceptional woman could describe love in those two interwined dimensions of phisical and spiritual, as yuo do, in this piece of art.
And the music is just the perfect background for such an experience.
You keep surprising me. Wonderfully done.

Thanks love for your wonderful comment, you are sweet x

[Richy Moon]

Great writing here, It has very vivd details- I could feel it as if I was there and it sounded very nice. Great poem!

Thank you sweetheart xoxo

[Corset]

This is how it will be for me or it will never be, 13 years and you write your passion for your jeans as if you met only last summer, this is exactly what it is like between two hearts that hear each other. amazing how you find the exact photos to express your words in such a way that fill to the brim with the emotion you are wanting to put out there, and then you put it out there with such finesse and comprehensive strength. xxx

Thank you so so much for these words dear Corset.... much love your way, also from my hubbie, xoxo

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Truly deep with romance, and a little bit of slight erotic here and there. But, nonetheless, let the Red Moon shine.

Thank you Greg for your time, and words, Eli

[Frieda P]

I'll never think of amalgamate in quite the same way ever again! You make me dizzy, you're so talented. It's like a beautiful love song.

Oh dear.... thank you from both of us very much.... xxx

[quinfinn]

this is powerful and beautiful to the point of being mesmerizing. your poet's soul is showing....well done!

Thank you from both of us, dear friend! I feel happy with you always around! xo

[quinfinn]

ditto!

:)

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Dear Elisa, This poem is a masterpiece and has "HANDSOME WRITE" written all over it. Your words and imagery melt a beautiful image in my imagination.My favorite line was "Just ignite me my dear Your icy wind teases me."
I do not know what they are giving you in the Netherlands, but keep on taking it my dear :) LOL!

Sincerely yours
Cord :)

LOL, you're the best pal from NJ, buddy through the universe.
It's freezing badly here now, it makes the best out of a writer see?
You understand my humor, you're the best on that, as Pax is too...
LOL I laugh now very handsome and hard lol..... you're my bestie! as it's a mix word of English and Dutch :) but you understand I guess ;)

Sincerely yours too sweet friend hugs!

Eli xoxo

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Friend hug right back at you:)

Handsome huggerssssss :) xoxo

[Adam :P]

great write

Thank you very much Adam :P

[Pax]

wow, wow, wow... another breath-taking write... romance, passion and sensuality really shows in this write... really admirable poem... you create it with such eligant words and always a pleasure to read that touches your heart and mind...

Truly wonderful write my dearest friend....

Aw, lovely, I'm in tears.... me and my hubbie worked on it for a periode...
But our busy sceduals, got in the middle now and then, I'm so happy you enjoyed and felt it dear. Thank you from the core of my heart. Love to you ♥

[Pax]

now i know how much you work hard on this... its worth every tears of happiness dear friend... *hugs* and your welcome

You're the best! when you're In Eindhoven call us, we pick you up to Arnhem xxx

[Pax]

that's what i wish as well to go there again to your beautiful country, visit my sis and you as well... in time... in the future when there is enough money...

Can't wait! we all together will have such a wonderful time, crossing the country, I will let you see all here, each museum, and anything you want. Even we can cross into Germany, near my home, it's lovely, the biggest mall of Europe in Oberhausen.... just a few minutes from Arnhem.... :D lovely on Christmas time.... and I could take you to Amsterdam! we could see Van Gogh, and Rembrandt, and all you wish.... :D just give me a call :D

[Pax]

oh, oh, oh... I'm on tears... I've been wanting to see Van Gogh's works... his my biggest inspirations... I would love, love to go there someday... i can't wait either... i will give you a call... definitely... its gonna be a blast of inspirations...

We will have the most fun out here!!! you're always welcome my place is your place dearest friend! oxxoxoxo it is soooooo inspirational :)

P.s. if i come to Saudi, I will give you a call... :D:D:D or if I'm in Asia, that is one of my dreams........ even to Dubai, just want to see the scene of Mission impossible 4 with Tom Cruse on that building :D:D:D

[Pax]

oh.. i would not recommend it... its like an open prison here that's what they say... i cannot mingle with you if you'd come for it is forbidden to mingle with women or girls unless you are married to that person... and you have to wear the abaya.. the dress that covers all of your body except the eyes... I'm not saying your not welcome here or its not a beautiful country but when you come here you must observe their strick rules and thier religion as well(its a muslim country), maybe because the rules is makes you like a prisoner...that's just my opinion...
Dubai i highly recommend it for its an open city now.. and lots of beautiful places there...specailly where the hotel where the MI4 was filmed... if you come to asia specially my home country philippines i would recommend the beaches... we all have those beautiful beaches....

I will wear an abaya... no problem, I always have respect for the country I'm in, when I lived in Naples, I did this too, to enter the San Genairo church. I can feel you in these rules... it's very controversal, and also conservative how it can go, but then again, I respect every rule on ground which is not mine. I really love the beach! I'm just crazy about them! That would be awesome.... xoxo

[Revery]

Wow Elisa, so sexy with all the metaphorical connection and descriptions. So lovely dear. I especially liked,

"Your eyes are tattooed on my
Skin

Your study my heartbeat
In your fingertips

I love the way you write. Thank you for sharing.

I almost forgot the picture, incredible. You find the most intriguing photographs.

Thank you so much dear from me and my husband! lovely words! the earlier write of ~ Blue Mountain, will soon be readable again... there we used also body painting, as it's a thing I do... so I love that art particular. Your words make me always smile! Thanks again :))

[Sheila Kline]

Your write of Red Moon and Blue Mountain is absolutely spell binding as I listen to the music and slip away through the clouds into the realm of their world of romance and love!! The wind carries their voices singing in unison surely all the way to the highest pinnacle where the Goddess of Love surely smiles with approval! As the snow of the Blue Mountain melts from the passion of the Red Moon, the stars shall spin with ecstasy, blaze, and fall with wishes for those who are without a love to wish upon!! This is a dreamy, "get lost in" creation............I am still enjoying the view!!!

Dear friend, and soul sister, thank you from whole of my heart, from me and my hubby xoxoxoxo beautiful words!!! ♥

[Sheila Kline]

You are most welcome!! Your write is truly wonderful!!

Muwah!!! xoxo sweetheart!