~ Like an Elephant

~ Like an Elephant, the Eli's Like A Animal series... ;) E.L. Fun, In between serious projects, Acrostic, Music, Jazz

~ Like an Elephant

 

 

Low sounds of your ponderous body

Irresistible memories of the past

Keen insights like the beholders eye

Elegant with flair, and musical Jazz

 

Animal-ish well weighted

Neither to need too much

 

Emancipated and an older soul

Love for family, and the partner or herd

Educationally  surviving,

Primeval corpo in dignity

Hateful at those who did do you wrong

Analytically almost artificial

Nations there of you for so long

Time just came to sing the song ♫

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

My first Acrostic,
(in my series of my: " Like an/a …… “specific animal” I tried to be..."
For a moment… ;) )
Just some fun in between my serious projects to come...
Transformed the mind and thoughts into an animal,
Instead into only the Human Beings…

Once had to be the first time…

Enjoy xx
Writing is such a fun....

Reviews

[icelandicblue]

I love and I am humbled by this magnificent animal. They express many of the more positive human qualities. Again the melody hypnotized me after I read the poem- giving me time to think about how much I really do like elephants and I feel for them in their plight.

A touching acrostic- not an easy task.

Thank you dear, yes, this one rolled out, when I felt in a Jazzy mood.... I went lately to my pianobar, here in The Hague, (Netherlands), and there is always life music, when I came back, I managed my scribbles... :D while sitting there on a table with a red glass of wine, merging me into these notes, I saw elephants, (how stupid)... or just beautiful... Jazz is connected to them, I think :)

[icelandicblue]

Well the whole process sounds perfectly delightful.

Thanks again dearly... :)♫

[Tree]

The way you combined the jazz with your poem was way cool. Sat here for a while, listening, then rereading. Very well expressed/ E.L

Thank you Diego :) glad you enjoyed, and found it cool he he...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

ahhhhh The music soothes my soul!....and the lighthearted wordplay was fun and refreshing...an enjoyable read Sis! I loved the jazzy tone, and amusing thoughts which you have penned...Lovely write!

Thank you very much sis :D it was fun writing it, and doing it... so glad you enjoyed, XXX

[kublakhan27]

You have blown me away with this one Elisa...even though you've referred to it as a fun piece, it is full of sympathy and profundity (I hate using that word but it's the best I can come up with right now haha)...I don't know if it's intentional but I detect a very tight kinship with all animals here...this is one of my favourites from your catalogue, which is saying something :) Take care my friend xox

My dear friend, how happy I honestly am, you look always further, beyond and see the things you read, there is nothing more beautiful for me to see, what it did to your brain. So grateful... thank you xox

[kublakhan27]

I deflect all credit to you my friend, for writing the things you do...it is a joy seeing the world through you eyes...hope you're having a great weekend :) xox

You too dear! :) Sorry for the abcence.... I'm a traveler, and never on one place lol.... here and there, wifi and not... ;) I loved your words! I really do treasure you my friend. Little gem you are. xoxo have the best time of your life! this weekend! :) - Eli

[kublakhan27]

:) That's a good way to be...traveling keeps everything fresh...you never know what kind of adventure lurks around every corner ;) I am not as ambitious as I like to be but maybe the future will bring more adventure into my life haha All the best to you, my dear friend *hugs* :)

*Absence..... uhum.... too much Jazzy notes..... fuzzy mind.... ♫

[kublakhan27]

Fuzzy mind? I think I may know how you're feeling there ;P

Really good though lol :) just only slept two hours, back on the road again, ready for another adventure :D have a brilliant weekend buddy! xxx

[kublakhan27]

:) Yeah sleep has been scarce for me the last few nights for a number of reasons...I'm enjoying the jazz the accompanies this piece though whenever I click on it haha...take care Eli :) xoxo

:) that's nice friend, that's the free spirit... love that, you too take care, and you know, I'm inspired by your works, so you will see me very soon.... :) with care. xoxo