~ Winter Valley

~ Winter Valley

A Poem by
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Winter, Winter Thoughts, Season, E.L. Elisa Laura

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~ Winter Valley


 

 

Small frozen particles

Become a cold blanket

Merged into a winter desert

 

White clouds on the ground

Of perfection and balance

The broad waves of the valley

 

Dancing along the terrestrial

Structure... under which secrets

Are sleeping, a season long...


 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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I think this is my favorite one of yours so far. You were able to achieve a complete picture with your words, you really took me there. I saw the snow, felt the cold. The stillness of the whole landscape. When snow covers everything, are the screts beneath being buried, or slowly exposed? When all colors dissapear under a white coat, must we finally confront what is in that "valley"... I mean, wasn't that the whole point of The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo? "Small frozen particles" all weaving a larger picture... You write beautifully, it's a great joy to browse through your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Indeed or slowly exposed... it's a winters mystery. I like that. Thank you for picking so much inter.. read more
sithlordjp

7 Years Ago

you are quite welcome.

7 Years Ago

:-)



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I think this is my favorite one of yours so far. You were able to achieve a complete picture with your words, you really took me there. I saw the snow, felt the cold. The stillness of the whole landscape. When snow covers everything, are the screts beneath being buried, or slowly exposed? When all colors dissapear under a white coat, must we finally confront what is in that "valley"... I mean, wasn't that the whole point of The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo? "Small frozen particles" all weaving a larger picture... You write beautifully, it's a great joy to browse through your work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Indeed or slowly exposed... it's a winters mystery. I like that. Thank you for picking so much inter.. read more
sithlordjp

7 Years Ago

you are quite welcome.

7 Years Ago

:-)
peace and perfection

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much ... :)
love the song choice well much to the solemnity you painted in your word. Just right in its snowy magnificence. there is something about the winter that makes it so peaceful & calming aura as if everyone is asleep. i like this, short and straight to the heart.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Beautifully worded my friend... all lays hidden under our Dutch snow right now, true treasures.... t.. read more
captain

7 Years Ago

a pleasure to read you :), everything wakes in spring, and its even more beautiful in that day, wher.. read more

7 Years Ago

That's the dream, and elusive romance of winter, making a rebirth to spring... till they meet again .. read more
A spectacular poem. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
What a beautifully scenic thought to go with the picture Elisa. Like the earth in hibernation, storing its energy for the coming season.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

:-) Thank you very much!
I like this poem, it is very peaceful. Like the silence of falling snowflakes. Very inspiring. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it, truely appreciated!
It is a winter valley indeed, and it is winter here where I live now. Anyway, I'm glad that you're back on. Miss reading all your beautiful works.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Greg my friend, so good to see you around. Hope all is well with you, thank you so much. Here it's w.. read more
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Pax
you describe it such a balance that its really beautiful and appealing to read...
i love this... how wonderful as it falls and covered everything around hiding the sleeping history. Wonderful work dearest Friend :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Yes, winter is so magical dear friend... Thank you for your wonderful words, there is much snow here.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

oh... that've very nice to look at... like before in 2011 when i was there...then my sister said its.. read more

7 Years Ago

Yes :) I hate that too... today I got out on my bike, and with snowboots on, I saw people slip, look.. read more
I could read this over and over. As a matter of fact, I have! lol
It is in the blanket of snow that purity is captured. The refreshing beauty is not only heaven on earth, it is a season to rest in peace...to be still in serenity. Gorgeous write Sis!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

Oh sis, yes, you felt it.... landscapes of love, of mystery, they are covered with snow, of the view.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

7 Years Ago

We have always had a connection Eli...I just can't explain it as well as you can. You're truly amazi.. read more

7 Years Ago

We do, did, and have... nobody can enter.... it is truly special. So are you! my all!
woow
This is beyond description
Simple beautiful and deep
Well done

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

7 Years Ago

I thank you from the cold Netherlands.... hugs!
Yasmin

7 Years Ago

lol
you are most certainly welcomed

7 Years Ago

:-) Eli smiles....

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