~ Winter Valley

Winter, Winter Thoughts, Season, E.L. Elisa Laura

~ Winter Valley

 

 

Small frozen particles

Become a cold blanket

Merged into a winter desert

 

White clouds on the ground

Of perfection and balance

The broad waves of the valley

 

Dancing along the terrestrial

Structure... under which secrets

Are sleeping, a season long...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

I think this is my favorite one of yours so far. You were able to achieve a complete picture with your words, you really took me there. I saw the snow, felt the cold. The stillness of the whole landscape. When snow covers everything, are the screts beneath being buried, or slowly exposed? When all colors dissapear under a white coat, must we finally confront what is in that "valley"... I mean, wasn't that the whole point of The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo? "Small frozen particles" all weaving a larger picture... You write beautifully, it's a great joy to browse through your work.

Indeed or slowly exposed... it's a winters mystery. I like that. Thank you for picking so much interesting things out... :) pleasure to read your reviews . :)

[sithlordjp]

you are quite welcome.

:-)

[Clayton Bardwell]

I know this valley. I yearn for the secrets of spring to be revealed.

You so do feel it poet.... thank you for being so seasonally brilliant, gusto y corazon!

[h d e rushin]

Only you EL can make winter charming.......thanks for sharing, dana

Awww.... your words do too... ;) X

[J. J. Nightingale]

Some look out on snowy waves
And see only white silence

But you, the poet and the woman
See Life and love and sorrow
Wrestling beneath winter's cover ..

Love this one .. Jazz

Thank you so much dear Jazzy, I've missed you, and your words!
So nice to see you by.

[J. J. Nightingale]

So wonderful to see your words again .. And you r welcome .. :)

So are your scribbles, I do love them immensely! :-)

[J. J. Nightingale]

:)............

:))) x

[Belle]

Snowflakes, the beauty of this small frozen particles is a giver of both blissful and solitary mood. A profound description of the season Dear Eli. I experienced one long winter season few years ago and now this poem brought me back to the breeze and smell of snow.

Thank you so much dear soul sister, I'm so happy my feelings and thoughts could do that with you, so happy to have you by too! thanks dear. X

[Belle]

Your feelings and thought always reaches me, Dear Sis.:D
I would like to ask how to do the music in auto play? I would like also to do that in one of my poem.

I would love to explain you that, but I promised mr. Tate not to tell... ask Tate Morgan... he will explain it to you xoxoxo your words are beautiful dear, always a pleasure to be around of you!

[Belle]

Ho, okay :D Thank you Dear sis as it is also a pleasure to be around here with you.

Mr. Tate is a good friend too, I hope he will tell :D

I hope too, I'm sorry, but a Dutchess always keeps her promise.... I don't want to be annoying or anything lol.... it's just I promised and I do what has been asked to me. Love to be around you too, I've watched the site, I will buy it soon... :D you're a godess Belle, for who you are and what you do! xxxx

[Belle]

Yes, I understand definitely, no worry and nothing to be sorry. You are a woman of conviction and for that I understand too that you are a woman of words. Aha, two godess LOL! ;D Cheers for this! :D

And for the books, thank you so much. that made be happy more. The children really need new school and we are still struggling in helping them building new one. A copy is more than enough Dear Soul Sister. :D

I miss our Pax dear... Our soul brother, he hopefully comes soon back, as he mailed me like I must too... :D:D:D (that time)
Thank you for all you say, yes, the godess you're!!! and I do admire my sis.
I will help, I promise, but first I have to have money myself a bit ;-) I know, all the little things help... hugs sister love you xx

[Belle]

I am missing him too. I just had a talk with him last night and I believe he will be coming back soon. :D
BTW here is the direct link of the book in your vicinity, I just asked our publisher for it, I think the words is in Dutch, reson why I do not understand them LOL...Well it is all for you anyway, Dear Sis. :D hugs too and love to you too...
http://www.amazon.de/Angels-Cried-Stephen-L-Wilson/dp/1481852191/ref=sr_1_cc_2?s=aps&ie=UTF8&qid=1357789226&sr=1-2-catcorr

It is in German, (Very often confused with Dutch) as it is pretty simular, and I understand it perfectly so no worries, it's great to have that link, thank you dearest !!! xooxo

[Belle]

Ho German. I do not know the difference at all. Ho God! LOL.

I understand dear, German is pretty difficult, as Dutch is too.... but for me very easy, as I had it 8 years in school

[Pax]

this conversation made me smile... miss you both...:)
hugs to both! :)

Hugsss sweetest friends :-) xxx

[Prolific In Verse]

Somtimes I fantasize about living in an ice castle, like the forts I made as a kid. But as the Inuit who had 100 names for snow, well - the season's will inspire a trillion more poems no doubt.

What's winter like where you call home? Brief/mild? I thought so......nice poem.

C -25 F -13 almost max, rough wind, Icy skin feeling... I guess like your home, almost. We are quite on the same line....
You're also such an HSP, no doubt, as you as a child
Had already really vivid thoughts. Interesting isn't it?
Thank you very much for your thoughts :)

[CS]

This is so elegant, Eli. There is a fine mix of science and nature with the "frozen particles" and the "waves of the valley". All come together to paint a picture of serenity. Those winter deserts are something very special.

Thank you so much for these words dear friend, Winter is really coming here, like it had a month of delay. And I'm excited for it, as I do love those magical views, when the feelds are white, and I can take my snowboots on, and make long hikes... Thank you very much! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

pull such blankets up ever so tight
so that we, may cuddle the night
a secret of whispers, frozen in air
seal the connecton, that we both share

you are the scarf round my neck..

Buddy you're so romantic... it must be your Mejican blood ;) lol :D
Thank you with whole my heart for your review!

[Antonio Valentino]

my blood is always caliente.. but then you make it that way..

amd im glad

[Chris]

I've lived the pic you put with the poem.

"Seems..." words just have to flow today.

* Warm winter smiles *

[Chris]

you DO know I wrote one within the review box... "Seems..." I didn't want to intrude on your space - it inspires thoughts and perhaps mine might distract. But you do have a way that will inspire thoughts.

You never disturb kind sir :) it is great to have your thoughts, by. They are as snowflakes always. Thank you so much.

[Chris]

well then - "Seems..." came from yours.

It is wonderful we can inspire eachother, so do you so often with your writes... I will pop in later to read your thoughts.

[Lonely Islander]

Love winter, love the cold, but a sad season for the poor and old. A beautiful poem, describing the season in a particular place beautifully:-):-):-D.

Thank you very much for your words and time Lonely Islander, much appreciated :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent write about a season I really dislike. Mostly due to the fact that I have to shovel.

Thank you pal! :) I so do love winter.... though (but that's me) he he