~ Cinematic

~ Cinematic, Elisa Laura, E.L. Cinema, Movie, Love, Nostalgy, Europe, Fun, Summer nights

 

~ Cinematic

 

Back in my memory, I watch that movie

We both so loved on that summer night

I still have that striped shirt I was wearing

It’s getting eaten by the moths right now.

The only thing that not got eaten yet,

Is my memory of time, long ago.

When I’m old and probably forgotten,

I hope to see back my memory

Like a movie fragment of my own,

And that I wear that striped shirt again,

With holes, and not based on lost memories

But on a favorite loved summer night…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Androglossia]

This is classic, my dearest and I loved it. You delivered the poem with elegance and certainty. I liked your choice of words here because they are spontaneous they made the lines flow smoothly while keeping the thought intact. I especially liked the photograph because it went well with the theme of the poem:) Brilliant work once again, dear! I'm going to favorite this.

My dearest :) thank you so much, your words humble me always, and I will be soon back around here... missing you! (((Hugs))))

[ChemicalMadness]

I love this whisper of a memory....this striped shirt. Almost like perfume hanging onto a shirt after a night together....I don't want it wash that shirt or let the air steal my memories of you ....but I know it will

Cm

Oh thank you so much CM, for you really get it! yes, I still have my striped shirt hanging in my closet, for it has memories, of this special night, :) Vapourous transience into Nostalgic memories, ah yes... thank you dear x

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow, I love the feel of nostalgia those summer nights, it is still fresh. I love this piece, very relatable and stunning.

Hi Marc, thank you very much, so glad you liked it. :) thanks dear

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome friend :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Love in one summer night...
How could you forget that memory of love? When we get older, still the memory remains....in our hearts.
Nice talking about memory of love. Like my own memoirs of my first love...which I can't forget til now and will remain a very nice story to tell to my grandchildren in the future.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece.

Yes, exactly that, thank you so much dhaye! always good to have your thoughts by on my poems xx

[Pax]

ahh the memory of those memories at cinema night... this work takes me back to my own memories of that moments... it's a special day for those romance in the blooming night.... i feel the treasured memory you conveyed dearest friend... great job!

Thank you so much bro xx

[Pax]

big sis... you've been busy... hope your doing alright... stay healthy big sis! ~ your certainly most welcome, anytime! :)

[MoriartyMesa]

The music fits to a point, I think your reach is awesome.

Well said by you I will trust it a bit ;) thank you dear

[Sugar Plum ♥]

lovley, romantic and so expressive as always! I like the way you create a fairy tell in little words, you create pieces of different realities inside each other...really amazing!
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02.04.13

I'm so happy to have you around, thank you so very much!!! x

[beautiful dreamer]

wow this is so amazing. it had me captivated as most of your poetry does. i am never bored when i read you writing. i love the story behind this and the depth of though and creativeness. beautiful. truly, absolutely, beautiful

Thank you :) it's great you felt the vibe of this story dear... *smiling*

[beautiful dreamer]

you are very welcome :)

xx :)

[Deuces]

Lovely piece about nostalgia and how it can never be taken from us. Material items, smells, music... they can bring us back to a moment 20 years ago in half of a second. And you're right... the memories are never lost. Beautiful write.

Aw, exactly, you always get me, thanks for this review my friend :) so nice! I will WA you tomorrow... and explain all ;)

[char]

Just beautiful...and she will remember because she wrote this poem ;)

Ha! thank you dear, yes, true to that... lol you're original ;)

[char]

Original and not an abstract thinker, that's me :)

That's great :)