~ Highway of Dreams

~ Highway of Dreams, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, There...

~ Highway of Dreams

 

On her knees she felt the soil,

The light and soft drops as 

Transparent worlds her wet skin.

 

Thousands of  little crystals

Reflected the early moon’s shimmer

She was arrived in his dream...

 

Now there he stood, upon the stream,

" Come take my hand "

His low strong voice whispered...

 

He sounded calm, and pleasant

The way he looked at her, made her heart sing

And believe in his trustful manners

 

She took his hand, and climbed

Upon the edge of these two delightful

Elements of this place, filled with magic

 

With the passion of curiosity,

And fire sparks in her heart,

She gave herself over to his land

 

With twilight in the air, and the whirl of leaves,

She looked upon his white elves hair,

As he smiled, and said, "You are safe here"

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Do what you must ;)
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

You are a siren of poetry dear soul! I have walked in your palace many times before..listening...lingering..soaking in the hues of light and dark...passions and tears. I was afraid that if I made a noise..it might fade away like a dream. I am confident now that it is you I hear singing by the water! Thank you for sharing your beauty.It has brightened my soul and led me back to a home that is growing green again with life.

Thank yo so much for this most stunning review.... :) so happy you're here in my Second World. ;) you have rich feelers, and a great reviewing skills. I shall come by soon for you!

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WOW. The imagery is just wow!

Thank you...... :))

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You're welcome. :)

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great story that you could continue on. The magic and mythical appeal to me in this piece. You are safe here is a great way to end this poem.

Thank you so much dear lady, I will think of that... (to continue)... :D

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. I like pieces that take me away; an escape if you will.

Now I'm working on it... :) you gave me more inspiration dear, and I will come back for your beautiful poetry!

[Poetic Beauty]

sounds good. Let me know when you have completed it.

Thank you sweet friend, (Sort of part 2 is now posted).... I don't give them numbers, as they could be readed also seperately... ;) xxx tomorrow i go read you!

[Poetic Beauty]

I will read this tomorrow after I get home from work. I am getting ready to turn in for the night.

Take all the time you need my friend... no presure! :)

[Distant horizons]

What beautiful imagery your dream world brings Elisa. A little sadness at waking is always a good sign that your dreams were beautiful. Here's hoping for many more to come, as well as the beauty of reality too :)

Thank you dearly my friend... beautiful words of you!

[Distant horizons]

From beautiful words of yours :-)

(x) and :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

WOW BOOM! A great wave of perfect imagery comes, it is enchanting and dreamy I love the story progression and stunning words flowing in this beautifull crafted piece. Thanks for sharing!

Thank you so much DJ ;)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome friend :)

[Pax]

How dreamy your words are... a surreal filled emotions in your sleeping hours... a safe trip to fantasy dreamworld... safe in the arms of your love... amazing one dearest friend... as if i was there watching you two fly in the elemental magic... the wing has guided both wings... 'fly high' ;)

Hehe, wow, thank you dear, hugs

[ritchie carter]

i just want to say that i agree with the other coments you have a fantastic way of putting across you poetry

Thank you very much Ritchie :) glad you enjoyed it.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is sensational and surreal...a magical harmony within the elements... I felt the beauty of a growing love... the spark fueled by curiosity truly brought forth the passion. When she surrendered to him and his land, it was pure divinity. A Stunning write, Sis!~xoxo~

Beautiful words here, sister, thank you. :) they are treasured in my heart. xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your always top writer Sis!...I love reading your work. XXXX

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You are! :D

*blush* ...... thank you really, your words mean the world to me xxx
You're my big example :)

[captain]

elegant & mesmerizing, those are how i felt in reading your poetry. The beauty & passion runs through you like water. Beautiful work!

Thank you dear Navigator ;) so glad you liked it...

[Androglossia]

You wrote of emotional safety with such ardor and brilliance, my dearest:) I can visualize a lover dreamily striving towards valuing and developing the inner qualities of emotional safety which is a good thing because emotional safety is a two-way street of openness and vulnerability reflected in a combination of words and body language. Which is also necessary for every soulful connection. You have a very creative way of expressing your feelings and desires, Eli:) That's one of your attributes I admire.

Thank you for this sweet Maryanne, what a wonderful review... I'm really honored to have you by sweet friend xx