~ Let me kiss the Silence

~ Let me kiss the Silence, Elisa Laura, E.L. A poem from out of my hiatus, forfeelings, birds, love, rest, life, spring, happiness, moments...

~ Let me kiss the Silence

 

 

My silent muse,

The only way I see you;

Is; “like a prince of forlorn decades”

The question is;

“Would you stay”?

When I will forget “the time”?

 

Sip from your glass of wine,

Finish the blood of pleasure;

We are falling stars of love…

 

For our sins we do

Control in our strength;

 

Days,  are maybe gone,

But nights lasts long

Longer than anything...

 

Let me drown, into your arms

That are velveteen steel;

Let me be forever there

 

For I feel safe, and home,

Next to your heart---

 

We were too soon,

On a frisky night of love;

A steamy place of grace,

 

Now we know flying time isn’t

Only important,

But level is…

 

The very soft sighs whereby

We see our muses flow

Richer than we still both breathe...

 

I embrace your gift,

Of another day;

The tattooed hearted love to stay,

 

For I am, just a simple glimpse

Into your whole universe

Of grace…

 

For now just let me kiss the Silence

Of your heart---

 

Because I’m near…

 

 

-           Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Let me kiss the Silence
was a write I made, when I hiked for a day long, I sat on my bench, in the sun, and there was a little bird, resting on a tree. I thought it would be nice, to share this into metaphor with you... for I don't believe I didn't felt a moment...
Thanks for reading, until soon my friends, when time permits. xx



- Elisa

Reviews

[Jack...]

On a lonely branch you watch me as I write, my thoughts and dreams fly to paper as you might to a new tree, on silent wings. Still I see you, though deep in thought of another who builds his nest in my heart, I fly to him on winds of spring as you my little friend, dance in the warm sun.

Very cool Elisa, so beautiful and warm and filled with love.

Thank you so much my good friend, from the road, for popping in on this a bit older write, so appreciated, have a good Sunday.

[Lydia Shutter]

The almost solemn beauty of this write wrapped around me and carried me through the lines. Nature is such an inspiration for a poet. Elisa, this is overpoweringly lovely! Lydi**

Thank you so much, I'm so pleased to see you by, knuffel...

[Leonard Birch]

Simply excellent and beautifully written Elisa.
Thanking you for a great read.
Leo

Thank you so much my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

[sharonlee]

Haunting beauty in this... metaphors and poetic imagery simply enchanting.

To while away silent moments
sweet company so rare to find
Oh songbird! share with me a fleeting breath
and soothe this heart of mine....

xx

Hi love, aww thank you humbly for your beauiful words on my little poem, always good to see you by rich soul xx

[sharonlee]

Peace & hugs for you Elisa.

Love, Peace and a huge hug for you too Sharonlee. always! x You are a gemstone!

[Melissa S]

The way I read this is you are teetering between fantasy and reality and letting us know that it is okay to be in the fantasy world as long as you want but you have to have some sort of balance between the two worlds. Even when you go back to reality you are always close by. This is just my interpretation of it and it and that is the beauty of poems to me people take from it what they need. xo

Thank you so much Melissa :)

[Pax]

i feel the love that you always give to your muse... i read it over and over again and i felt fully loved by the poet's thought - as if it transcend and give a love vibes to your readers feelings... making us feel that we must love our muses for they are our soul's water, energy... and many more... a lovely feeling you give to us big sis... a great piece you have here...

Love, I'm so glad you get me in all, and you see my muse can be totally fictive, too, (not sayint in this write it is) but it can be. I love you rich mind, for picking up things, as you do with your rich feelers, and I do appreciate every single word, that comes out of your brain. THANK YOU For feeling me, and saying: ~ as if it transcend and give a love vibes to your readers feelings... making us feel that we must love our muses for they are our soul's water, energy. SO SO PROFOUND :) you make me re-live, smile, dance the boogie ahyeee :D I'm happy with you. Lil bro you are fantastic among all of us!!! blessings xoxo

*saying I meant, oh long nails on a terribly long night and keypad :P

[Pax]

big smiles.... and *happy dance ;D... no worries on the typo... I'm the prince of typo.. lol..
you know you are amazing poet, so that's a fact... that's just what i get after reading this ever beautiful piece... thank you for sharing it...

Big smiles too lol.. ;D You're my typo prince yay!!! let's buid a realm :D lol :D only invited all kabayans, and indo's :D Thanks luv, I do so appreciate you, even when you don't feel a hundred and you come back for me (even if I say you must rest) oooh bro what can I say, more? than I love you :)

[Pax]

lol :D ...it's alread a realm of imagination here, anything will can happen in our thoughts... your my favorite big sis... hugs... I am around for you.. a brother, and a friend... :) nothing to be said that you've already said... it's already enough...

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I truly enjoyed the concept of this piece...it's almost a collusion with the enemy, but the enemy is your muse. Your muse is not really an enemy at all, just an impish and sometimes devilish shred of your own psyche personified. There is one bit metaphor here to be deciphered, but this begs reading the poem several times, which I have done and plan to do again. We search for the muse...but in reality, we are the muse. Hmmm...so thought provoking!

Wow, dear, I love your interpretation, and insights, :) we do indeed, we are forever musing. For I have a several muses, and I never stop musing, each muse I have can take the best out of me. For creative process this is rich. It could be also muses in nature, for I do love to absorb each and every little thing... (sometimes it goes automatically) you know all about that ;-) hehe... Yes, you are right, once I wrote a piece, called muse, and there in I say exactly the same as you do here on your ending, fantastic how close we think!!!! thanks dear.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

It is interesting to think about...we all talk of "muses", but really, these muses are just ourselves. Even if we are taking inspiration from nature or love or another person, it is US who writes the words and creates the drama, emotion, etc. Just something I've been thinking on lately :)

It's true, it is really true. I thought many years, why I can't find the perfect muse, but that is certainly because I'm imperfect myself. And I'm glad to have know myself through many experiences. We seek what we need... haha! mostly a muse is a muse also in vice versa, cause that muse seeks the same... you know, weird analogy, but actually true! You are fantastic, and you are right!!! it is US, very clearly. Great minds alike hehe xx

[Poetic Beauty]

This to me is when our poetry is silent. When we have the stillness and no words of poetry come to mind. How we love those moments when inspiration flows and our muses stroke us with enrichment but how we loathe those moments when we are apart.

I saw you wrote this while hiking but I wanted to tell you what it spoke to me. Amazing job

Greatly said my friend. I do love your reviews, for they are as rich as your own poetry, in one eye caution you can truly see. Thank you very much.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are more than welcome. I am having a reading and writing day today. Enjoy the mini adventures

Hehe, me too, I'm here to catch up today, and will for a while :) so much mail, so much lovely writers I missed in my hiatus... as yourself xx

[Poetic Beauty]

I have been on quite a hiatus. Like three months lol

lol, oh you longer than me lol, when I came back I felt weird... I couldn't get used, now it goes better lol...

[Poetic Beauty]

I come and go alot. I felt like that the first time I took a break from the sight but the longer you are on here the longer you have known people on here. Most miss you and wait for your return.

Yes, that is true, although I think we both like our freedom more at times, than being too much stuck on here hehe... (free minds).

[Poetic Beauty]

That is true. I love to read on here and post new things but life is an adventure made to be lived. We have to get out and explore in order to open our minds and emotions to allow new memories and inspiration to fill us.

Perfectly said, I couldn't agree more, for I always say, the quote of "Osho: "To be creative means to be in love with life. ... its beauty, you want to bring a little more music to it, a little more poetry to it, a little more dance to it.” :))

[Poetic Beauty]

here here well said

That makes me smile we think alike hehe, great to have you back here (even if it's briefly) I shall always come back for you.

[Poetic Beauty]

same here. I have quite a few that I pop on to read. A lot of the good writers have left so my list has gotten smaller. Sometimes I am just random and pick pieces that catch my attention.

It's sad they have left, I'm glad they pop in on us though :) I see them now and then.... :) happy to have you always by dear friend.

[Shirley Wontas]

Great methaphor ~ lovely poem worded excellently...well penned, Elisa..I enjoyed reading it.. :)) ~Shirley

Thank you dearly Shirley! :) good to have you by!

[Shirley Wontas]

I'll come and visit your page again and again I guess..you write beautifully.. :)

Terima kasih Shir! :) I will come back for yours too! glad you're here!

[quinfinn]

some incredible metaphor and gorgeous emotion throughout this lovely piece of beauty. Eli writes the stuff of dreams and fondest wishes.

Thank you so much my friend for your words, good to have you by! I will come back, so much to catch up on :D

[quinfinn]

no worries/no hurries

Thanks for the trust, and patience... :)