~ Tonight I Followed You

~ Tonight I Followed You, Tonight You Followed Me, Elisa Laura, E.L. Flamenco, Rumba, Love, ART

~ Tonight I Followed You

 

There was a signal, just a tiny little signal,

        Upon the water, where I sat tonight,

                It felt like an uprising aura of your soul;

        That slowly came closer,

Like a stealthy black panther

        Bringing the beat, like no one could --

                 Coming back for a moment…

        Touching my toes, putting shoes on them,

 Blindfolded I felt to dance with you

                   Tonight I Followed You,

Invisible like two teenagers, on our lake;

        You moved me like a Queen,

                  There was nothing needed 

           Anymore to be seen

As the gods not even can help, our fate,

        What can we do than follow?

                 Two steps, I was forward you

This time, you followed me,

         Two heartbeats into our rhythm

               And just one soul to see,

 

                   One soul truly free...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

08/01/2013

Author's Note

While I spoke to you, tonight I told you something...
Something in your ear...

This is for you A. W.
;)

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so touching and stirring to the soul. I too felt the dance that takes place here between two souls in love and in bliss. Beautifully penned. I like how you personalized this poem with...."on our lake;" This is another great masterpiece and I am glad to have read this.

This was one for my sweetest friend, and partner in the arts, thanks so much for being here on this one too, means much to me... I see my video stopped grrr, Youtube have to edit a lot... within the time... but I will. Thanks so much dearheart xo

[joshua deathdealer]

When you have the time you much teach me how to make youtube videos autostart. I've tried everything with no luck...well it worked one time but never again.

That I'll do, but only for you ;) lol no just kidding, that's pretty easy.... shall mail you soon about that, and also other thingies, I've discovered :P

[joshua deathdealer]

Ok. at your convenience. its no rush.. Thanks (:

[Anand Sehgal]

Two heartbeats into our rhythm
And just one soul to see,

One soul truly free...


touchy lines. Loved it :)

Thank you so much Anand, my dear new friend, and it's lovely to see you by, thanks for your time and review, have a happy weekend, I'll come back for you xo

[Anand Sehgal]

you are welcome dear :)

Makes me smile that you're one of the people with patience! thank you so much! (means a lot to me)... :)

[Pax]

sweetest whisphers breathes through your words big sis... the words makes us realized that love is still growing despite some harsh fate in a relationship... there is tranquility in hardship, this is simply beautiful... :)

My dearest Brother, yes, you said it so well here, I will treasuer this review... what if love isn't there anymore? and all left overs are to torture? I couldn't think of that, I'm so so glad you and me, bro, always dance and boogie in the light, even in darker times... love to you xoxo HUGS!

[Pax]

happy to have you around too... big hugs... it's very hard to think if the world is out of love, we live like robots then if that happens... or just a lifeless body living with no emotions attachment.... that is really frightening, coz anything bad can happen...

your most welcome... and more hugs to you...

Exactly so true... It would make me a zombie for sure. I can't ever think of that, for love and much love runs always through my veins, :) (and yours too) and all your Kabayans, for it's tanned inside by the weather and the sun.... :D xo, you're the best... Tight hugs lovely bro! xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is divine, Eli!!...VERY NICE!!

The black panther is indeed a stealthy, sleek creature...an exotic soul.

You have captured something epic... a reflection of mirrored souls caught in a sensuous Tango...

This is done with exuberance and dramatic flare... romance purified!!

I love that you have pulled me into this intimate moment. Beautifully done, Sis!~xoxo~:)

Thank you my dearest, I always have wet eyes, when you come by, for you and me feel the love, and the need, of it.... I love you! you mean the world to me. xoxo :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your soul comes to life in your poetry, Elisa. I liked the gravitational pull that the two bodies have between each other,

"There was nothing needed
Anymore to be seen
As the gods not even can help, our fate..."


What a love, divine!

Kelly, love, when you come by to read me, I am so happy! thank you dear, for your most loving words always! till soon, I'll pop in I think on Sunday, for I'm on the road this weekend (mostly each weekend)... happy times love xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

...be careful, ok! My love to you, dear heart!

I will love, thanks for your support, friendship and wonderful heart.... I will mail you soon xx much love always! happy time this weekend xo

[David Scott]

Precious!
We all want to be persued with the desire to be one.
Beautiful.
I think your lips left a kiss in that whisper... ;)

Thank you for reviewing again dear David, it warms my heart. And I'm so happy you enjoyed, it is a write for my most lovely soulmate ever... he will be pleased to read your thoughts xoxo :)

[Clockwork]

I like how the speaker in this one follows her destiny and does not resist the gravity of love. For that reason I enjoyed the line "As the gods not even can help, our fate,/ What can we do than follow?" The simile that described his true aura really resonated with me as well: It felt like an uprising aura of your soul;/That slowly came closer,/Like a stealthy black panther." That is truly a powerful spirit that we see in this one. Well done, my friend on capturing the spiritual love of soul mates.

Thank you so so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this one, for this one is for my partner in art, for he is truly special, and I know for so many years. :) Great review my friend. I'll hope to come back later, for yours, if not I hope tomorrow... thanks for all you do, it means a lot. :)

[Clockwork]

You're welcome. It was my pleasure :-)

It warms my heart, always to see you by my friend, :-) sorry I'm so much offline... come by soon for more.

[Hana Saemon]

I love this!

This time, you followed me,
Two heartbeats into our rhythm
And just one soul to see,

One soul truly free...

You've described the act of falling in love and having someone feeling the same way perfectly. Love the flow and imageries. Well penned!

Thank you so much Hana... :)

[ayosonolowo]

Nice write up
i really like it
good job

Thanks... :)

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

I'll be back for you my friend.... sorry I'm so much offline. Busy times.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Invisible like two teenagers on our lake -- lovely line!

This is a beautiful expression of love and longing my dear friend. I could feel the emotion fully and freely as your heart danced in pur bliss.

Two heartbeats into our rhythm
And just one soul to see -- my favorite lines--two becoming one; the split halves that were torn apart by the gods into man and woman are finally reunited into one true soul. Blissfully poignant!

Thank you my dear friend for your words, I so appreciate them, and congrats with your book, yay, tell me soon more, my dad got me an e- reader lately when I was there, so I want to buy your book and read it....:) proud of you!! X

[Pryde Foltz]

Lucky, A.W. Great write, Elisa.

:) He is... He knows... :) thank you so much dear Pryde.