~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

~ As it's the way to grace

~ You are Beautiful, even when it Rains

 

 

 

 

Marks you left behind, in thoughts for me to find,

Dripping like the rain on my soul

Days of destiny, in fate of our realm

Fresh, for a new born day in it’s recall

Where did we lose the path of wisdom overall?

Slumbers, reach, and bliss shall fade away

With you not near me, I shall overcome

But in the final day I shall scream your name

Between the time is lost, and not the same…

Next worlds open in moving journeys, 

As history repeat itself so wisely always

Within the invisible thought,

We shall jump like children on fresh grass

Take the insight to a lower level, and make joy

Feed the ducks, and walk and hike

Where no poison is left behind, to find…

And where a purity of you shall live the maximal

Within the arms, of love in full metal

And the heart which beats shall melt

All what has mattered to this love so grand

Shall rain on you in Karma's hand

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Legacy]

Elisa Laura,

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Starting with this - Yes I downloaded it to my computer. Such a beautiful piece, compliments your write. Nicely Done

For the Piece - Rating 100

Who is this man not to see and feel what he has or has had.

Curtains drawn on a splendid piece.

Thank you for the privileged of reading.

Have a Wonderful Day

Legacy

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[Ursula Kay Vos]

Oh Miss Elisa! You never do disappoint! Your poetry here has grabbed me from your beautifully versed title, and you've held me throughout with the intense play and intertwine of the words. As you take us through your beautiful story, you control the emotion with your pace. Painying a vivid portrait of these lovers journey it's as though I'm watching, or perhaps their story could be my own!
You write with such control, and mastery and in doing so you have caused a deep and emotive response any great poem should create!
Great poetry!
Thank you Miss Elisa!
~Ursula~

Thank you so much deary, your reviews are always so bright!

[Ursula Kay Vos]

Oh your poetry inspired the review! :) how have you been??

Thank you dear... I'm so so, health is not what it has to be, but I'm going on... hope with you all is ok...? hugs from the Netherlands, more I shall private you... xo

[Ursula Kay Vos]

:) please!!

[zainul]

"We shall jump like children on fresh grass"
I wonder how passionately one can write such lovely words that touches the hearts!
Lovely work.

Just to give it a fresh taste :) thank you zainul! appreciated

[zainul]

I really tasted the fresh taste.
Thanks for your endeavor to touch our hearts.

Always welcome friend, glad you enjoyed :) I shall keep on writing...

[zainul]

That's a great gesture indeed.
Keep on writing.
I will be around.

Thank you again, for those I am writing... :)

[Owlgirl]

This is gorgous. Amazing writing!

[Alicia Beavis]

A pleasure to read.

Thanks, pleasures are my way to grace.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

it is beautiful. dripping with the pain of separation, yet a profound sense of belonging together again one day.

It was written to someone truly special, so thank you...

[A.A.Romanczuk]

It always is :) otherwise it would not be so beautiful :)

True!!! thank you again xx

[A.A.Romanczuk]

You're most welcome !

Thank you again dear :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

:)

[Raven Starhawk]

The core of this is...in so few words...a gift that can easily be embraced. It is like a journey from start to finish...a journey that only love can direct.

Thanks love

[Elege]

I almost said breathtaking.. I must just say thank you.

[Vaen]

I LOVE THIS :)

[Pax]

wow, breathtaking poem, it peaks so much. i was in awe while reading this. its sooooo goooood. great job my friend.