Unforgettable

This is meant to disturb you.

His last words were ones to remember

She remembers the date the 25th of December

That was the day he left them alone

She wouldn't of agreed if she would've known

 

She was a three year old girl on that morning

It was chilly and outside snow was pouring

She wanted cereal so she went to find her dad

She walked in his room and he looked sad

 

She said daddy what are you doing up there

Why aren't you making breakfast or in your chair

He said he was sorry and please forgive me

He had a rope around his neck going towards the ceiling

 

He said flip the switch and she unknowingly listened

Shen she did the fan started to spin

Daddy landed on top of his bed

While his body painted the walls red.

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy or was speechless. thanks for the reviews.

Reviews

[NovaeSpes]

I am complete speechless and completely overtaken with surprise its as if i could see the whole thing happening as I read it wonderful write =)
~Koda~

[Thea]

Wow...I was actually speechless but it was a great story made into a poem...The descriptions fitted the whole piece...I enjoyed this...Great job.
:)))

[Joshua Smit]

gaaahh... this really is a sad poem, im quite glad u never used vivid imagery XD

if you did it wouldve left me scarred for a while