Exile

It's very short...

White lies

Small Smile

Turn Your Eyes

Little Child

Turn Your Gaze

Just the Haze

Of Today's

Exile

Plagerize the Laws

The Good of the Evil

Why Don't you sit, Stay a While

Because there's a line for the Gallow

All Stay in Single File

 

Author's Note

I don't know I was just waiting to write this all day...

Reviews

[Perfect Mistake]

I liked the little rhyming you did. Good job on the poem

[ghost writer]

love this..LOL..there is an ambigous feel but I connect to it..

[The Pretender]

The rhyme scheme is a little off, maybe cut down on it or build it up a little more? I couldn't really grasp the concept, it was so short and quick, But definitely a great start!

[ChervenkovaM]

Wow, it's short simple and has a beautiful structure :) I love it!

[Tomislav Petricevic]

It's a cool poem, I like the concept, and the rhythm is good at the start, but maybe you should've considered rhyming the whole poem, to keep the rhythm going on?
But still, I liked it!