~ I’m just on my way

~ I’m just on my way, E.L. Elisa Laura, Freedom, RoadDevilette, Love, Richness, Life

~ I’m just on my way

 

 

Let me be just a tiny little woman,

All alone, nowhere and everywhere

For the road is my home,

There I shall feel safe;

 

There don’t exist any questions

How to go on further, for further

Isn’t there yet,

 

Where eternity continues…

     I shall transit

 

When time is with us, we shall be drowned

In these arms, of love,

Rest, and peace.

 

For now, I keep on moving,

Among my shield of life

 

The only steps I take are those

To be closer to there

To walk my lifetime, of minutes

 

And when I may rest,

I shall get rewarded, with the gloom

Of a noiseless little present;

 

And rest for eternity,

When time stands still for a moment

There where I donate the earth my last breath

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

A poem from May 2013
Feel free...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

Radios blarin' and my hearts on fire
Put a bullet through my head and then we'll call it a night.
whoaa uh oh oh uh oh. whoaa uh oh oh uh ohhhh.
Stereos singin' and i'm out of luck,
another cigarette and i'll say i've enough.
and whoaa uh oh oh uh oh. whoaa uh oh oh uh ohhhh
burnin' down while. i'll be your favorite lie,
packing all my things, i'm leavin' YOU behind.
i've got my keys! i've got my keys! forget the load! forget the load!
i've got my friends, i've got my friends.
we'll hit the road! we'll hit the roadd...
riding on the back in the fear of the standards,
the standards that now we will reign,
and i'll i've gotta say is that i'm sick of this town and lets screw the standards and lets make a stand!
burnin' down while i'll be your favorite lie,
packing all my things, i'm leavin' YOU behind.
i've got my keys! i've got my keys! forget the load! forget the load!
i've got my friends, i've got my friends.
we'll hit the road! we'll hit the road...
and i'll i know, all i know, is that i'm never lookin' back, never lookin' back again.. ohh again.
i THOUGHT i told ya... i THOUGHT i told ya! - eatmewhileimhot

Haha, beautiful ;-) buddy... "Screw the Standard" -x- thank you thank you!

[Jack...]

Captivatingly beautiful. I feel as if I have walked this journey with you my friend. It kind of had a dry arrid feel but an air of self worth and determination. So very nice to see you back.

Oh well said Jack, you're as ever precise on what head and hart want to bring over. I'm so grateful to have you by! always... :)

[Peter H]

hmmmmmm very poignant write my friend profoundly felt

Thank you so much my friend :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[kublakhan27]

Where eternity continues, I shall transit...I love that line, and it seems to sum up the spirit of the piece...I also liked "my shield of life" and "to walk my lifetime of minutes" The musings of a soul-searcher for sure...I know cuz I think the same thoughts regularly...of course, I could not articulate them in the way you have here...great piece Eli :) xo

I think you can Steve... :) for you are one of the finest feelers of this site here. ;) What a wonderful ray of words, thank you so much my friend xoxo :)

[kublakhan27]

:) I never considered myself a great interpreter of others' works but maybe it's an exception for those who are close to me ;) Always a pleasure reading your work Eli xoxo ;)

:) I couldn't have said it better my friend. Thanks again... x

[kublakhan27]

Always my pleasure Eli :)

:)

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine use of graphics, and a quality poem that convinces with honesty and poetic observation. Like this.

Thank you very much Leslie...

[Corset]

El!You are back! How wonderful! This feels so peaceful, and in the solitude of ones own thoughts, feeling safe and content just to be in the now, no concern for tomorrows, yesterdays are forgiven ,s a flower garden in your palms. love it! welcome back!

My dearest, thank you so much, was just thinking of you!!! you're teleathic LOL... ♥ your words are beautiful as you are. I must say, I need to get used to be back... having a hard time with that too ;) he he... but I try to manage it. The rest was so lovely, the peace too. But you guys are keeping me up on here! for I love you!

* telepathic...

[Corset]

Bab steps till you are if full swing again so you can stay longer this time! ;)

Huh? how did I missed this one... I hope I hope, my darling. Thank you so much! it's at least a eye-candy for me to read your fantastic quill again!!! x