~ Moonwater

~ Moonwater, Elisa Laura, E.L. Death, Life, Dreams, Connection, White, High, Otherworldly, Surreal, Fantasy, Fictional, Message, Signs

~ Moonwater

 

 

         Entangled, tied

             We felt before  -  we died

    In thoughts, death we kissed

        You and me

              All in white

 

           Moonwater - gleam,

     Shine so bright,

Upon our  faces with your light

 

         From here up high;

      We dance the sky, of blue and mist

 Of sleepless waltzes , and their twists

 

       We so lived in you, but died in me;

   Just one color now, is all we see

 

         Through the woods of high

    Surreal we become, as we die

          Moonwater shine!  

 

                          

                 “Let us fly”.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy -x-

Reviews

[Michael Thrower]

That was so beautiful, like a whole book written perfectly in just a few words. So much story within this, it really blows my mind. The selection of music was amazing to have along with this piece. What is the name of the song? Your poem really takes me to a different place, I want to read it over and over so I can pretend that I live in that short moment. It was magical, no words can describe what you wrote. This review is pointless because the only way to respond to reading this is by the sign of a gaping mouth.

Michael, thank you so much oooh you humble me hehe... I am so glad, you truly enjoyed this dream (I worked out into poetry) of me. :) I will come back for you, also with the music. Many thanks dear friend, Elisa

[V. P. Trujillo]

I have a sense that although we speak little as of late, we seem to be weaved by the same fabric of thought and dream. I'm loving your feminine poetic voice, as always.

And that's the unconditional strength and love we share, in dreams within our dreams... thank you for your wonderful comment bro, means a lot. :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Indeed, I hold onto you, silence be damned.

We should call soon... silence be damned indeed... I really miss our talks! my holiday is almost over, so will call you then... :) :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Sounds good.

Yeah... ^^ have to tell much lol.... be aware... ;)

[Troy Henson]

You express yourself so well my dear. Such charm and and flow to this that was like silk. Your insight into life and death and life after death is exquisite and thought provoking. Many thanks for sharing Elisa:)

Regards
Troy

Thank you so much dear, your words, do understand the world of my dreams. They enter the reality and fictional parts in both ways. Grateful I am with your words. :) a very profound review you gave me. :)

[Troy Henson]

Its always a pleasure:)

.............. :) many thanks really!

[The Representative]

A correct structure - that's instinctively how I've responded to the poems end: that whether or not I know the meaning, it's correct.

Thank you very much my friend, for the review, and your time. I love the fact you respond from within, the first impression you've got from it, means the most... Thank you kindly.

[The Representative]

Remember "I understand you", from some months back - as far back in fact as February.


Also....remember when I were to have repeated myself, some relative while later:


Time is power!




I've now self-published 'The Representative' Elisa.....such is its eternal power, such is its density of emotion; such is its attack on the current world status quo - I'll never have to write anything else.


(Thank you - for offering a substantial comment in return).

I remember everything you said, I remember all, even your eloquent fantastic accent, England.
I will read "The Representative" with all care, and shall comment, when I feel, my comment is valuable enough... it sounds already very interesting, so I won't forget... ;)

[The Representative]

It's available on Lulu - under the name Thomas H Cullen.

I'm desperate for a first round of readers.

Thank you for letting me know, my friend :)

[The Representative]

Last reply, on this strand:


Have The Representative read to you - hear it, as opposed to reading it.

Without necessarily being intended, this is what TR calls for.



Last thing:


The European Elections, we recently had Elisa......they're insurmountably superseded by The Representative.

[joshua deathdealer]

"Save me from the lion’s mouth: for thou hast heard me from the horns of the unicorns." - Psalm 22:21

Thank you intensely for bringing this up, and quoting it my bestie. (: -xx-

[Pax]

The last line lingered in my thoughts, like the way we always tell about each other big sis, that we must fly high. Death is around us, death in feelings sometimes it dies and then next day it arise, like the pheonix's repeated cycle. Such beautiful piece big sis...

Indeed dear bro, thank you so much, we tell this often to eachother... I'm so happy to have you by on my work, I shall be back soon... Hugs x

[Pax]

hugs, oh I missed you... i hope your doing good and well... take care always! :)

[Joshua W. Harris]

There is something so incredibly surreal about this piece. It is beautiful, and the chiming in the background only helps to set that mystical sort of ambiance. It kept me engaged the entire time, and I thoroughly enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing it! ^__^

Oh thank you so much Joshua, so kind of you! I'm very pleased you enjoyed this piece of me! :) it was a dream mixed with reality ;) Eli