Fresh Start

Fresh Start

A Story by WriterGirl247247
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Leaving home isn't the end. It's the start.

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She walked timidly into the dorm room. The four bare concrete walls were chipped and reeked of mold. The twin beds looked equally questionable. But she was here. She had made it. First in her family to go to college. She was excited and terrified at the same time. Her life as she knew it was over. No more sleepovers, no more fun on the playground. The Barbies went into the closet. Her parents couldn’t fix everything anymore. She was on her own. She took a breath. That chapter of life had ended.

     And this was where the next began. 

© 2016 WriterGirl247247


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You are awesome.I love your work.This is awesome!!

This story Reminds Me of,’ waiting for the end’, by Linkin park.
Thank you for sharing :)!

Posted 2 Years Ago


you are a great artist, painting pictures using words, i love this story( i wish it was longer

Posted 2 Years Ago


Looks like a great start to a new and interesting story.

Posted 3 Years Ago


This reminded me of my first time in college, the anxiety that came with it, and the excitement of a new beginning. Thank you for sharing your work!

I hope you read my work and enjoy it just as much I enjoyed reading yours :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write, Enjoyed. Thanks, for sharing. Look forward to reading more writes from you. Eva

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 23, 2016
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