Deaths Downfall

She became a skeleton,

Eyes half opened and lips tightly sealed.

She pulled her hand out of mine and moaned.

Dignity was all she had wanted to keep.

Reviews

[WizardsAffliction]

The title eliminates any confusion this poem may present, and considering how short this is, its imagery is fantastic, though I myself would have liked to see some expansion.

Good structure and great flow. Well done.

Hope this helps and happy trails! :D