Fragments

Fragments

A Poem by Insatiable Writer
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Sometimes when we look back on a memory, for as much joy as it brings, it can also cause pain.

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They flash by like speeding trains,

Flickering lights that cause me to

Catch my breath.

I reach out to grasp just one,

A piece that brings me joy,

And yet, the memory is too

Sharp and my mind

begins to bleed as my 

tears begin to spill. 

© 2022 Insatiable Writer


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REZ
I love the imagery. It really sets the mood for the reader. I also liked how you said the memory was sharp and then illustrated what it felt like or what it could do in a physical sense. It gives a bittersweet kind of feeling like you want to remember, but it's also very painful. Well written! Keep up the imagery and good work!

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Insatiable Writer

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!



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REZ
I love the imagery. It really sets the mood for the reader. I also liked how you said the memory was sharp and then illustrated what it felt like or what it could do in a physical sense. It gives a bittersweet kind of feeling like you want to remember, but it's also very painful. Well written! Keep up the imagery and good work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Insatiable Writer

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much!

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Added on August 6, 2022
Last Updated on August 9, 2022
Tags: Poem, Poet, Poetry, Writing, Words, Memories, Pain, Joy, Love, Writer

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Insatiable Writer
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I'm just a writer seeking others to share my passion with, maybe make some friends along the way, and build one another up as best as possible. more..

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