Sorrow

The sorrow and fear of rejection that you have when you love someone and you are sure that they do not love you, so you stifle your emotions.

Sorrow

From the depths of my soul, whisper the secrets of my heart
As tendrils of mist, that swirls and falls apart
Dispersing into thin air, never to be spoken
A path of dreams, that cannot be awoken

A drop as rain falls upon my cheek
Then another, and another
But from where I can not think

Sorrow and regret rush like rivers in my veins
I search for the answer but it is never to be obtained
Hidden from all is the reason for my anguish
Encased in glass is the hope that I cannot extinguish

~Wycked~
 

Author's Note

all discussion is welcome

Reviews

[Cassidy Mask]

Amazing Imagery.
Nice job.

Cassidy

[~angelalala~]

beautifully written. i love the imagery, makes me think of a quiet, misty, cloudy morning just before a storm, standing in a graveyard & grieving over a lost loved one. very well done.

[JRB]

Secrets not faced are truths denied, and fall apart when not spoken only because of the fear they will awaken, so rain as tears flows, not for sorrow or regret, but rather answers obtained. Hide simply from one self is the anguish of desire snuff out by doubt. Just may take on your work, very nicely done.
Jan/Uisiom