Losing Love

See a pattern in my work? I really must find something to write about other than pain...

 It seems things are going well

You see her and smile everyday

You're taunting and teasing hell

Because you know it can see the way

 

You are when you're with her

So happy, you kiss her

It seems you're dancing on a cloud

And then it all falls down

 

 

Chorus:

Now why does it happen

When you think it's all right

Why does she get those feelings

While you dream of her at night

You're so sure that it will last

Then a blast comes from your past

And it hits you in the face

It's those feelings

Those feeling of 

Losing love

 

 

You still see her everyday

Walking through the halls

And you know that it's too late

To rewind when you pause

 

If only she could see

The way you still think of her

She would see what could still be

And you wouldn't lose her

 

 

Chorus

 

 

And you know you still care

But she's so unaware 

Of your feelings

 

But you can't seem to say

No, you can't find a way

To tell her

 

It's over but you don't want it to be

Throw those feelings aside, show the world you can see

The you that you hide in yourself

 

The you that you hide so now one will know

Those embarrassing things, the dark secrets that grow

And find someone to love you for you

 

To find someone to love you for you

 

It's a daunting task

And it's a lot to ask

But it's worth it

If you find her

 

 

Chorus

 

You don't wanna be losing love

So you hold desperately on to love

But it slips away

Reviews

[Lydia Wegner]

Very good song/poem, one that I can most definitely relate to. I wish a guy would feel like that to me, instead of I always wishing he'd want me back.

Anyways, I like it.