Hey, Listen!

I wrote this for my Character Ed class last year. We were talking about changing others. =[

Hey, are you listening?
I'm here
and i'm whistling.
Pay attention to me
only me.
Not her or him
but me.
Dont pull yourself together on a whim.
Catch my drift
and follow my gaze.
Enjoy the pace
And swallow your daze.
Listen now
no excuses, buts or hows.
Dont furrow your brows.
You can change by youself
You dont need any help.
Can you see through?
Can you be you?
Or do you want me to?
Only you can change.
Not me
I cant rearrange.

Hear me out.
You can do this.
Its not that hard.
You can go far.
Farther than any other person i know.
But u need to believe
in yourself and me.
I'm on your side.
Always
So dont lie.
Please do not defy
yourself or I.

Reviews

[writerholic]

diffrent the rythem of it is diffrent. but isn't everyones.