Autumn

Shall i compare thee to the Autumn trees?
Your leaves do change throughout the weeks,
and as i long to feel your breeze,
you dry the tears upon my cheeks.
I stand outside and watch your leaves,
as they begin to fall,
and like them, I'd too, crumble,
but you keep me standing tall.
And though the days grow colder,
My love for you won't fade,
You're my eternal autumn
my never ending shade.
I'll love you still in winter,
and when the spring sun burns,
I'll wait still through hot summers,
'Til your autumn breeze returns.
it isnt very hard to see
your love has made a life for me.

Reviews

[Ian]

Wonderful poem! My favorite lines were:

"Shall i compare thee to the Autumn trees?
Your leaves do change throughout the weeks,
and as i long to feel your breeze,
you dry the tears upon my cheeks"

Very deep, so well written... and full of emotions. Great job!

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Ohhh this one is really good... love through the seasons of change! You have a gift and should definitely write lots more like this.. so far this is my favorite!! thank you!