Angels Exist

I've never known an angel
Whose wings were white as a cloud
Whose voice as celestial in sound
As her beauty profound
From my view from the ground
And turn my life around
I've never known an angel
And I think I never will
But that isn't to say they aren't real

Reviews

[Kay]

My skill is not in poetry, so I don't know how helpful I can be here, however, I will try. I like how the beginning and end are echos of one another, it's a call back I enjoyed. Using the word 'from' twice in the fifth was a bit off-putting, perhaps you could try using a synonym? The hope and yet shadow that you capture in this handful of words is striking to me; I think it proves that one does not need a bunch of long fancy words to get their point across.

[Esteban Morfín]

The flow of this one is just perfect. This might be one of the best I've read in this site, and also I appreciate the hope it emanates after the last two dark pieces.