SLAVE

 Your voice stirs the whispered Hunger deep within me

Making me feel desires of the ultimate guilty

I want you to pin me to your bed of blood red velvet

I want you to make me beg for permission to scream your name

Take Everything I am

Swallow me Whole

Leave me empty to never disobey

Command me to see everything your way

I want your eyes to draw in my body

I want you to Hunt me Down if I run

Wrap your arms around me and force me to lie still

I beg of you dont hold back any longer

Controll me, rule me, yield me,do with me as you wish
Make me forever the willing or unwilling prisoner in your newly erected temple

     Make me your slave...

   I Beg You

 

 

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

Your voice stirs the whispered Hunger deep within me
Making me feel desires of the ultimate guilty
I want you to pin me to your bed of blood red velvet
I want you to make me beg for permission to scream your name

WOW! I enjoyed the strength in this piece. You have a wonderful tone throughout which just thrilled me. I love the content, the way you arranged this and the impact that is there behind your words.

~Stephanie

[Dave Lounsbury]

I liked this a little too much...