My first poem(no name)

Im standing in the pouring rain

alone and confused

I wish you could see the pain

but it doesnt seem to phase you

This stress has finally killed me

Im dying on the inside

My heart thuds within me

as my sanity slips away

I fall to the ground

and my heart sinks in dismay

With my final breath

i whisper a farewell

and the last tear fall from my eyes

Reviews

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Heart breaking. I have had this as well and it's hard to deal with...most people don't have a clue. However, you do, and I commend you on that!

Don't Ever stop writing!!

~Phoenix~