Entwined

Entwined

A Poem by Evie

Tell yourself, time again

He's not the one for you

Why put yourself through that pain?

He's not the one for you

You train yourself to look elsewhare

He's not the one for you

Push thoughts of him to the back of  youre mind

He's not the one for you

Hate for him is redifined

He's not the one for you

You tell youre heart to repair

He's not the one for you

Though you cant block out that sense of despair

He's not the one for you

You tell yourself this everytime

You see him and that girl....entwined

© 2009 Evie


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Great writing! The fact that you repeated "He's not the one for me" and gave it a terrific flow. I totally know what you mean...I'm having the same deal right now. Hang in there!

Once again terrific job!!

~Phoenix~

Posted 15 Years Ago


Fantastic piece! It was very moving. The repetiveness of "he's not the one for you" is something that I can honestly relate to.

It almost ties in with a piece I just wrote, called "The Human Condition"

Anywho, amazing job!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Evie
Evie

Shorewood, MN



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well my names evie, im 14 yrs old and i live in MN....so yah i like to wright poetry and play my guitar, music is my life! i also lov 2 take care of animals and watch horror movies. i am absolutly obb.. more..

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