Horizon

viewing the two sides...

HORIZON

I see above me 

A beautiful view of 

What you call the Sky

 

I can see the sun shining bright,

Near it the gorgeous clouds...

 

I can see the sky smiling at me

With his beautiful smile.

 

But then I see down below

A ruthless sight of intolerance

Of what you call Land

 

Sometimes I wish 

I was in sky, chirping with birds

Shining like sun and free as clouds.

 

But what can one do

This has been said

So many times

But still there is no change, everything is just nothing.

 

But this is what is life

Starving for what you deserve.

 

Reviews

[Ees]

Wow. I wasn't expecting that sort of concept out of you, but I like it better that way. Very honest. Very true. I see the horizon of the title, but I feel the intent that this was simply a poem about the existence of life. Wonderful. The last line is perfect. good job.

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

;) ...pleasure..!

[MENEMJZ]

;).. Awesome !

[Rochelle Roberts]

a few grammatical errors that you may like to address but lovely imagery :)

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

thenq...nd yeah I'll try to fix 'em

[intuitivesoul]

Isn't this the whole truth. Didn't leave any stone unturned. I like it :)

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

Thenq..!

[Balkaran Sidhu]

Nicely done....explained the two sides very well

[Anonymous/Anjaan ( Yash V.)]

;)...!