love?

 

Is it real,

Why do I feel?

This is enjoyable to most,

But not me, I hate to boast,

I am stuck here with no one,

Gazing into the sun,

Waiting to see if anyone cares,

But all I feel is the blowing air,

I don’t see how you make it,

When has always trying to break it?

 

Is it just me?

Or do you see,

How people fall for others

But you don’t see there abusive brothers,

I see it all the time

To explain I made this rhyme,

 

 

Reviews

[Kenaz]

Good poem, but there>their

[I'm Just me:)]

oh yea lol

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I think the words would look great in black, but other than this it is great!

[I'm Just me:)]

okay thank you!!

[Roe]

amazing write the color of the words dont take away the meaning of the poem