Please, Kill Me

If death means freedom...

If death is a cure
Then please, kill me
Things I can not procure
Are things that beckon me
This life of mine is not worthy
For me to believe in prosperity
It’s time to close my eyes
Breath a sigh as my pain dies
And say I am free

If death is a next adventure
Then please, kill me
Places that I want to venture
Are places where I can not be
This life of mine is not worthy
For me to believe in victory
It’s time to close my eyes
Let my spirit rise
And say I am free

If death is a never ending dream
Then please, kill me
People I see in my dreams
Are people I can not see
This life of mine is not worthy
For me to believe in reality
It’s time to close my eyes
Let me say my goodbyes
And say I am free

If death is the end
Then please, kill me
Let it be my friend
A friend that lasts eternity
This life of mine is not worthy
For me to believe in immortality
It’s time to close my eyes
Ignore all the lies
And say I am free…

Reviews

Its sructured very well. You start off wth death being a cure and then it becomes the end. The repetition increases the power of the poem. When you ssay "i am free" it just maybe that you are not. The irony :>

[Reza Farahmand]

to believe in the other world is good, but the key for having a calm and very peaceful life there us to live in good here. no human is eternal. you can change the way you think about life and it will be worthy.

anyway nice poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. I believe death maybe another challenge. I believe we need to what good we can in a life. Maybe be forgiven for our bad deeds. A very interesting poem. No-one has come back to tell us how good death is? A very powerful poem. You made me think.
Coyote