Corruption
A Poem by Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin
Art for the evil
Getting away with all things
Corruption consumes...
© 2010 Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin
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Constructive criticism appreciated...
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. in south-east asia at least ... this is the true picture of corruption ... skillfully done ... your mastery over brevity shines through ...
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Picturing souls as work of art is beautiful....it took me awhile to get this one, and still I may be wrong....regardless enjoyed it...good work
Peace
Robin
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Izwoahscene
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Add "That" infront of "corruption consumes". Or you could change the last ine to "Consumed by corruption". Really well portrayed.
The evil get away with acts that are bound to infiltrate corruption.
An easy understand! Well done! :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
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gripping ~ composed perfectly to invite reflective meditation~
Posted 14 Years Ago
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Added on September 1, 2010
Last Updated on September 1, 2010
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Vicky Zhuang Yi-YinLahore, Pakistan
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I'm an amateur writer, who enjoys to write a lot. I almost write anything that comes to my mind, or what I am asked to write. My genres range from fantasy fiction to journal blogs and poetry to haiku... more..
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