Blossom Love

Basically this poem is about love and how it can blossom into something beautiful or turn for the worse.... Love is simply but loving is very complicated....

Who ever knew that love could be  so sweet
I guess the birds and the bees for they both desire sweet nectarine
As one lies at another feet longing for a taste of freedom and all that it brings
Drifting between seas

Beauty never bee so kind and love is blind

Cupid done shot too many eyes

As many heart lies to blossom

Like grapes on the vine

Drink, drink, drink

Taste, taste, taste

This victor, this glory, this prestige

Love is simple but loving is complicated

Loving to hate, loving envious, loving to fear

Draw nigh here to free ones spirit

Ones soul to make whole

Oh do blossom love, oh do blossom my love, blossom

 

Author's Note

I wrote this because I am a hopeless romantic who loves to love but loving someone is so hard especially when love is so easily confuse with lust... I am a very lustful person so though I love still lust is mightier...

Reviews

[Terry Kant]

Sentimental and heartfelt along with some truthful insight on the complexity of love. "Love is simple but loving is complicated" is a well thought paradox. I just got booted out of a very serious relationship, devastating, and I can very well attest to the quote. I loved her dearly, simple, but loving her somehow became a struggle because of slings and arrows of outrageous fortune. I love her still, but can love her no longer. Nice job shedding light on one of the many conflicts of the human spirt.

[Alex Boyd]

Yeah, my problem is that I feel like I do not deserve to be loved but I'm learning that everyone deserve love. Also I'm learning how to love which people forget how to do...

[cristamay76]

Love is simple but loving is complicated. Yes its true, even a child knows how to love! So often we complicate the union of love with conditions. What a man desires the most is unfailing love..which would be unconditional. Lust is the imitator the counterfeit if you will..but by no means the mightier...lust waxes and wanes, but love..love faileth not! Beautiful write friend, thank you:)

[Lizzie Mitchell]

love can be sweet but cupid's an a*****e

[Pryde Foltz]

Beauty never bee so kind and love is blind
Cupid done shot too many eyes
As many heart lies to blossom
Like grapes on the vine

A sublime love write, Alex.

[klawrites]

Lovely piece! cant wait too read more of your work :)

[stars are far]

well let me say, your poem is amazing, but about your Note..when you want to love, fall smartly, think and then decide, i know that all of us need love, but when you love because you need it, you dont feel its pleasure, but when you fall without planing, when it comes to you, and it comes to you, you feel its pleasure and the best parts of it, when you fall smartly, but after you feel safe, you continue by being crazy hehe... and your poem was very well writing, keep itup :)

[Alex Boyd]

Sorry for the late reply but I was searching for what to say but yeah you are right... "Fall smartly" I like that.